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 Aug 15 05, 17:03
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Turbulence (revised thanks James)
Wind changes direction: temperate southern breezes become icy northern gusts. Dark storm clouds cloak Sun’s rays; sharp hailstones pelt fertile ground. Budding plants bruise and tear as tempest seeks destruction. Turbulence recedes: blown by strong currents, unleashing violence elsewhere. Sunlight triumphs, warming chilled growth: harmony restored. On horizon clouds gather… ---------------------------------- Turbulence (original) Wind changes direction: temperate southern breezes become icy northern gusts. Dark storm clouds cloak Sun’s rays; sharp hailstones pelt fertile ground. Budding plants bruise and tear as tempest seeks destruction. Turbulence recedes: blown by strong currents to unleash violence elsewhere. Sunlight triumphs, warming chilled growth: harmony restored. On horizon clouds gather… Nina |
  
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Nina Turbulence Aug 15 05, 17:03 
Jox Hi Nina,
Budding plants
bruise and tear[;]
{as} ... Aug 16 05, 02:53 Nina Hi J
Budding plants
bruise and tear[;]
{as} temp... Aug 16 05, 03:11 Jox Nina,
Thank you. :)
J. Aug 16 05, 04:45 Jox Hi Nina,
I've just had another thought! (... Aug 16 05, 04:49 Cathy Hey Nina,
Simple? Yes, but your word choice... Aug 16 05, 15:25 Nina Hi J
Sorry, hadn't noticed you'd posted a... Aug 16 05, 15:37 Nina Hi Cathy
Simple? Yes, but your word choices... Aug 16 05, 15:44 Cathy Hi Nina,
QUOTESimple? Yes, but your word ch... Aug 17 05, 08:32 Nina Hi Cathy
Wow! How about that!
... Aug 17 05, 13:27 Cybele Hi Nina,
I like the way the storm strikes with ... Aug 18 05, 02:26 Nina Hi Grace
I like the way the storm strikes with su... Aug 18 05, 12:49 Psyche Hi Nina ! :sun:
I admire the way you c... Aug 18 05, 14:45 Nina Hi Sylvia
I admire the way you can express the po... Aug 18 05, 15:11 Jox Hi Nina, Sylvia
No offence taken whatsoever, Sylv... Aug 18 05, 15:40 Psyche QUOTE(Jox @ Aug. 18 2005, 18:40)Hi Nina, Sylv... Aug 20 05, 10:37 Psyche Hi Nina ! :sun:
Yes, I also love to tr... Aug 20 05, 11:04 Nina Hi Sylvia
thanks for popping back here to continu... Aug 20 05, 12:26 Psyche Wow, Nina ! That'll be quick work ! Lo... Aug 20 05, 13:09 Nina Hi Sylvia
Wow, Nina ! That'll be quick wo... Aug 20 05, 13:11 Psyche Same here, Nina ! Shameful... :ghostface... Aug 20 05, 13:43 
Nina Hi Sylvia
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