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JustDaniel
post May 1 18, 16:41
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folk yew

have scenery-yew
decorating parents' yard;
shows poetic form


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post May 2 18, 20:14
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pay to play

show’s poetic form
had no plot, rhyme or reason;
it’s free verse’s cost


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post May 3 18, 12:46
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Sir prize

free verse ala Scott:
Minstrel was in firm and old
cuz Walt used Viagra


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post May 3 18, 21:24
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mighty mouse club

Walt chews Viagra
to stop bruising on his legs;
dat and dis knee


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JustDaniel
post May 4 18, 12:37
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Registered Marbles

Disney's said daffy...
but his duck was the Donald;
dog was Goofy too


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post May 4 18, 22:55
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too Minnie drugs

dog was too goofy
to know owner was a mouse;
slipped him a mickey


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post May 5 18, 00:25
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putting up affront

slipped on his dickey
while tucking his shirt in;
made his pants stick out


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post May 6 18, 15:51
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half fast laundry

maid sticks his pants out
to quickly dry on the line;
shirts were wash and wear


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post May 6 18, 20:53
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's worn out

shirt with washin'-wear
creates bit of a wrinkle;
dryer warranted


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post May 7 18, 22:26
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rabbit’s foot-loose

dry her warren Ted
or your bunny hops in mud;
can’t get a leg up


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post May 8 18, 09:35
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mind your own business

can't get a leg up
to saddle self with career;
who'll pony up cash?


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post May 8 18, 21:06
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relative rewards

who’ll up ponied cash
thinking lady luck will come;
ante or uncle


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post May 10 18, 09:27
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can or can not?

ante or uncle --
it's put up or walk away;
which will save your fruit?


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post May 11 18, 07:16
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fuzzy choices

which fruit will you shave;
the kiwi we love or a peach…
both are appealing


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post May 11 18, 10:17
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sound appeal

both are a-pealing:
the town clock and the church bells;
are you set to watch?


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post May 14 18, 13:50
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agree in which means time

you are to set watch
so it’s synchronized with mine;
now we’re writer wrong


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post May 15 18, 07:48
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no direct shun

so your writer wrong
doesn't matter to you?
what is left to right?


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post May 15 18, 14:06
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custom airy

what if rite was left
when it was habit forming;
you’d leave a pact house


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post May 16 18, 07:29
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fall of the clan

he'd leave a house packed
when he raked them sans mercy;
mad at family tree


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post May 18 18, 21:06
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diamond in the rough

family tree made
a relative baseball team;
they were just bush league


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