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Still growing passionfruit, Larry Mate your opening is a stunner "icicle claws" Then drop into a piece of introspection... To finish off...farewell to the stark disclosures white Enter the Jade green of spring. You have not lost your touch. Regards, John |
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G'day Daniel I suppose you could go gently into the night--a good place to hide. You made a good job of this presentation--I did not miss a beat. How is the pullover scene can you get a glimpse of the lady. Regards The Finn. |
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G'day Larry' Poetry in motion... A poets simplicity of happiness. You write good poetry my friend. Regards, John :pink ![troy.gif](style_emoticons/default/troy.gif) panther: |
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Misery
Here I stand, bereft of energy.
Weary body bathed in pale light, scarred fingers, clawing, undergrowth, hooked thorns suckle strained sinews— open old wounds— drain forsaken history.
A pause, Weapon— raised.
Below the hilt— the blunt blade of conflict; in front—old growth, nefarious impediments. Swift blows repelled by the girth of time; past sins find no absolution in post regret.
Each sword stroke— No echo….
The tide of destiny reveals a stark burial, broken bones— a skeleton interred in shame. My conscious crusade, atonement, a failure ‘Enough—I must return to the sunlight.’
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Whooooee 75 years old and still have a few fans Thank you, gals I'm a lucky man. Beverliegh from South Africa sent me a private message. ![rose.gif](http://forumimages.mosaicmusings.net/style_emoticons/default/rose.gif) Not telling. Your friendship is appreciated. Tempest Fugit. John |
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G'day I know I'm a bit late. Yes Snow a good piece of editing. Ok by me. Thank you Sylvia, my friend, we seem to be together (a lot) in the gallery of contemplation. Regards, A |
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