 So In Love (Swap Quatrain), Odin 20 |
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 Nov 15 10, 07:01
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 4,592 Joined: 31-October 03 From: New Jersey Member No.: 39 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Larry Carr  |
SO IN LOVE
We cherish romance, we joyfully dance; tonight we'll tempt a passionate stance as starlit ribbons reflect a lovers trance; we joyfully dance, we cherish romance. Desires are burning, soaring to extremes, a stardust afterglow spirits our dreams, sweet, precious charms spell a yearning soaring to extremes, desires are burning. Your candied red lips I fervently pursue. I'm captivated, bewildered, have no clue; a bit dazed, I can't muster catchy quips, I fervently pursue your candied red lips. Paradise is your embrace, heavenly serene, you loving me, there's never any in between, no faux ecstasies, no foolish, futile chase; heavenly serene, paradise is your embrace. Temptation thrives in a rapturous tone, dulcet voices echo in an amorous zone, as caressive emotions indulge our lives; in a rapturous tone, temptation thrives. I'm so in love with you, what can I do? My body is shaky, my senses are askew... beguiled by your tempting eyes of blue, what can I do, I am so in love with you. ·······  ·······Give thanks for your new friends of today, but never forget the warm hugs of your yesterdays.
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Nov 15 10, 09:50
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Thank you for your entry into Odin's Opposition, John!
 Perhaps you'll rise up, drink from the Well of Wisdom and be crowned the 'bringer of victory'?  Best of luck in the battle!  ~Mosaic Musings Staff 
······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner   |
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