Thank you Leo & Cleo,
Your replies are appreciated, and the moreso since down here, activity isn't as it is upstairs. Perhaps we can generate some interest here.
Leo, ya just never know where I pop up. As to the crit thing, I reckon I did my share of it and now simply allow what is, "to be". I've also moved into the open form realm, which is probably more difficult to critique since the writer makes his/her own limits. There are no missing or excess feet to catch - that sort of thing.
Lori, I've been on the nostalgia theme for a bit. This one begins with the young leaving home and becoming independent, going thru the feast & famine cycles, falling in love, and moving on. It's those glorious years of our youth, and those are the ones best remembered. As is often the case, this is partly truth and partly fiction. It's a fact that I never was able to settle down in one place or at one job - have had several careers, including food & beverage (hotel), electrician (still am that), Realtor, and others along the way. I've moved my share and living 10 years in one place was a record. That's the reference to the nomadic blood and always being restless for no better reason than time to move on. I didn't embed any deep meanings, but the other party is deceased. There can only be memories. Heroic couplets >> but they should pack a big punch.
I'll need to look whether Plato is open to open form, now that I have a respectable handle on that stuff.
Merlin
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