Peach of an August - Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews

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Peach of an August, ae freislighe ~ Revision 3 ~ 8/23

galoutofdixie View Member Profile Find Member's Posts	Sep 2 06, 06:48 Post #21
Babylonian Group: Gold Member Posts: 69 Joined: 24-February 05 From: Houma, LA Member No.: 101 Real Name: Leigh Ann Writer of: Poetry	Daniel, this is super--I love the rhyme in the last stanza, very clever! I'm not familiar with this form, and, rather than go read about it and then critique, I wanted to just read the poem as it is without any set notions of how it's supposed to be. As I said, I think its terrific! The flow and the rhyme, along with the humor, make for a fantastic reading experience! I will now go educate myself and learn something about more about this form!!