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JustDaniel
Posted on: Oct 16 19, 07:25


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AWARE

Awkward wankers are rarely extraverts.

RARER
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Oct 16 19, 07:10


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ENGAGE

Extravert negligee-wearing grandmothers aren't getting engaged.

NIGHTY
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Posted on: Oct 16 19, 07:02


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COULDN’T

Contemplating originality upwards, looking down never titillates.

UPWARDS
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Oct 14 19, 07:38


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unfeigned hatred
eliminates guesswork
look down the barrel
and you'll see the clear water
collected from off your roof
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Oct 14 19, 07:32


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its cream's whey too much
for my old hands to handle
udderly confused
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Oct 14 19, 07:29


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rake up and leaves
dragging his tarp behind
a winter time warp
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Oct 13 19, 00:26


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… and since I just wrote this to a friend on AP who wants me to affirm that I'm not getting old...


I affirm that my brain's staying young
while forced oxygen fills up my lung
Painful feet won't concur
and my eyes start to blur
though I'm nibbling on hot egg fu yung.
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Oct 12 19, 21:02


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oh
you poor
sad sack soul
don't borrow so
much
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Oct 12 19, 20:55


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If what comes out of you are fine words
you can sell them for feed for your birds
so they'll flap in the sky
to the great by and by
or just drop on your head little turds.
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Sep 23 19, 06:27


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NUMBING

None using membrane beget increasingly numbered girls.

CREASED
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Sep 23 19, 06:24


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URGENT

Unguarded raunchiness gets excited novice tagged.

TAGGED
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Sep 23 19, 06:20


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USUAL

Unsavory sex usually advances licentiousness

SAVOR
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Sep 23 19, 06:15


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someone must be screwed
for family's seed to pass;
that impregnation
had best be consensual
or feud will emerge screaming
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Sep 23 19, 06:07


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been on whey too long;
so much time huddled inside
it comes out curdled
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Sep 23 19, 06:03


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summer-tanned
he goes inside for winter;
springs out white
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Sep 23 19, 05:58


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then
was then
and payment
is a bit past
due

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JustDaniel
Posted on: Sep 23 19, 05:55


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I'm afraid, if the pounds would drop off,
what I see must be less. Do not scoff.
A banana is small
for a stomach; that's all
it will be, so I'd better not cough.
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Sep 13 19, 06:07


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I should say here, however belated, that I'd read this long ago, along with Larry's observations, and since his were precisely mine, I said nothing. If you still stop in here, I apologize for my silence. Lightly, Daniel sun.gif
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Posted on: Sep 13 19, 05:58


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A sonnet in perfect form, but I think most of your enjambments are distracting from the great message. Inversions, as in the final line, are things of old as well. Would you consider rewriting this piece. I think it's worthy of it. treading Lightly, Daniel sun.gif
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Sep 13 19, 05:47


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Thank you so much, my dear friend. You're very perceptive, in that I did not take poetic license here. It all happened, and you're right. That visit to Tacoma blew the lid off of silence, both inside me and with some of my siblings. I really was shocked about many things that I learned, and I began understanding many things about myself.

And yes, I usually write in rhyme and meter. But I do a LOT of writing in haiku/senryu and short forms these days. I've been trying my hand at free verse (which is often metric), but this one is really prosetry. In fact, I've been encouraged to reformat it from poetic form to short story form. I'll probably do that here. Whatcha think?

deLighting in your sharing, especially in this often silent milieu, Daniel Guitar.gif
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Posted on: Sep 13 19, 00:46


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TAKING

taking a kindly inkling, nudging goodness

NUDGED
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Sep 12 19, 17:01


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CHILLED

Can heroin if licked lessen expanded diet?

EXPANDS
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Sep 12 19, 16:57


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PEOPLE

Potential eruptor of person's lunch: ExLax

POTENT
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JustDaniel
Posted on: Sep 12 19, 16:51


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YOUNG

Your old uncle's no good!

UNCLE
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Posted on: Sep 12 19, 16:49


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will rivalries cease?
will the Hatfields and McCoys
keep shooting down peace?
the Masons and Dixons can't
find a trace of their old line
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