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Jun 22 18, 09:31
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Keep your finest-toothed comb in your drawer, 'cause at AP there's more than before ever visited here; you can post without fear it'll sit for two months like post-war.
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Jun 22 18, 23:17
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Like post-war, it will sit for two months left unread even if there are stunts to entice some critique even if it’s as weak as my bowels. No one hears all the grunts.
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Jun 24 18, 06:45
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Please, I don't want to listen to bow'ls, nor to see others snapped by your tow'ls. Get me out of your dorm watching groan men perform as if apes. I'd expected some owls!
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Jun 24 18, 16:46
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I’d expected some growls as if apes had consumed far too many green grapes so the food on my plate helps digestion abate all the noise with a breakfast of crepes.
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Jun 25 18, 23:32
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I’d expected some growls as if apes had consumed far too many green grapes so the food on my plate helps digestion abate all the noise with a breakfast of crepes.
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Jun 25 18, 23:37
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All these noises at breakfast! What creeps! All the snapping and popping and beeps freak me out, and their hats! Are they housing some bats? All this sound while my dignity sleeps!
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Jun 26 18, 13:29
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All this sound while my dignity sleeps could be snores that sound like some old jeeps in dire need of repair but my glottis can share the love calls that whales hear in the deeps.
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Jun 26 18, 14:40
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Lovers called tell a whale of a tale; I'm afraid checking facts won't avail. But it sounds like it's real when you hear of a seal brought by Whale when it latched on his tail.
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Jun 27 18, 13:29
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When he latched on whale’s tail he was brought to a stand-still, the rope was too taut so he hoped his harpoon would release very soon for ski lessons was not what he sought.
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Jun 28 18, 06:47
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Why are ski lessons taught by a sot? If you're wanting to ski, then you ought to be sober, my friend. You could come to your end, and your wife would be (maybe?) distraught.
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Jun 28 18, 11:41
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If my wife is distraught, maybe you could console her, you know what to do; tell her you were my friend all the way to the end and to call you if she’s feeling blue.
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Jun 29 18, 11:38
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If I'd call her she'd not know my voice, and it's likely it would be here choice to call 911 and pull out a gun. I'd claim I'm James Montgomery Boice.
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Jun 29 18, 18:35
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James Montgomery Boice you might claim but she is not aware of that name. She’s of Methodist bent and to any extent feels that preachers should not seek such fame.
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Jun 30 18, 20:13
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I'm no seeker of fame, 'cause I know if I got it I'd still have to show I deserve it right now and I do not know how but to plant it and hope it will grow.
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Jul 1 18, 08:53
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If you hope it will grow when you plant something new in your garden, I’ll grant that for better success you must turn, mulch and dress your small plot or your chances are scant.
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Jul 1 18, 12:59
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I don't till in my garden while scant! With my neighbors right there, Sir, I can't dig in my underwear; I'm afraid I would scare the poor Lady, and her Lord would rant.
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Jul 2 18, 10:05
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Lord and Lady would rant if they’re poor, it would be more than they could endure so they levy a tax on the populace backs and their cattle and flocks and manure.
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Jul 5 18, 01:48
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If her prattle's producing manure it is time, I suppose, that you shoo 'er and go on with life without struggle and strife even if you retire to obscure.
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Jul 5 18, 17:02
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To obscure, even if you retire, might be causing a problem most dire for a good camouflage must be more than hodge-podge; success will leave you naught to admire.
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Jul 5 18, 18:57
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If you've naught to admire in success there's need that you acquiesce; you're a hermit now friend; life it out to the end or your life will be more of a mess.
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