In brackets are cliches. Originality is key to great writing, and if you don't know how, think of ideas, meanings, etc., that haven't or a rarely expressed.
[Reflective times]
[jar the mind] while salvation’s chimes
we neglect, [scurrying past] scarlet pails of hope.
It's said, that when we [give to those less fortunate]: [it helps us cope]
with [life’s ever-changing] dichotomy of scales - our ‘fortune scope’.
[Let us cherish] the [wealth of generosity] –
compose charity’s symphony;
a [sacred plea.]
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