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RC James
post Feb 8 17, 09:02
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Early Release

Showing only a slight fraction
of the vengeance
that enveloped her,
she had turned sixteen
in the harsh environment
where glum was the word
and the deed.

Suddenly, her horizon
turned teal blue/green.

A seminal berry
in the corner of her mind
relayed the notion to her,
excited her

to buy a new supply
of black lipstick
and to hastily
get into the wind.
 
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JustDaniel
post Feb 10 17, 16:21
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I hope this is about HER early release and not his.

Nicely done.

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Cleo_Serapis
post Feb 12 17, 20:35
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What an interesting response!

I take it this is a young 'rebel' with a cause as MC?

Nice use of the ten words!

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