 Stopping by Brew House on a Starved Stomach, A Robert Frost Parody |
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 Aug 8 03, 19:58
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 Assyrian  Posts: 203 Joined: 3-August 03 Member No.: 11 Real Name: Beth Writer of: Poetry  |
Ugh, Cleo!
That brings back too many memories of over-imbibing in my anorexic days. Hurl city, Baby! YICK! Oh, I feel queasy just thinkin' about it! Ugh! Ewww! Well, that is some strong imagery! I almost feel hung over! I think I'm gettin' too old for these kind of escapades! :p And, if he doesn't try the chicken breast next time, at least he should eat some thick bread and butter first! Trust me! :p ·······  ·······I am who I am.
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Aug 9 03, 05:32
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
QUOTE (Zeus² @ Aug. 05 2003, 18:59) Lori, sure you are not Mrs. Frost. Mustn't eat too fast, get agita. This has a nice finger-likkin' style to it. Musta made the beer in his micro-brewery. Cool. Larry a/k/a z2  Hey Z2 :devil: No - not me! I'm just a vessel of DeNile.... Thanks - this a fun, challenging one to write! Cleo :) ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
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Aug 9 03, 05:34
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
QUOTE (Nefertiti @ Aug. 08 2003, 19:58) Ugh, Cleo! That brings back too many memories of over-imbibing in my anorexic days. Hurl city, Baby! YICK! Oh, I feel queasy just thinkin' about it! Ugh! Ewww! Well, that is some strong imagery! I almost feel hung over! I think I'm gettin' too old for these kind of escapades! :p And, if he doesn't try the chicken breast next time, at least he should eat some thick bread and butter first! Trust me! :p Hiya Neffie! :kungfu: EEEwwwwwww! No hurling allowed here, lol! :ghostface: You're a riot! Thanks for the comments, this was fun to do! :D Yeppers, chicken is ??? :O :cool: :laugh: :unclesam: :kungfu: :love: :Oo: :blush: :upside: the 'C' ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Aug 5 03, 16:31
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Whose Brew is this I think I know?
Ferment of wheat and bubbles flow. He did not find a chunk or two, in this odd tale, I’ll now bestow. He gorged on bowls of beef and brew and left not one, a speck for stew. Between the fridge and cupboard lay a loaf of bread he did not chew. He left the room and joined the fray then fell asleep with no delay. He did not reach the bed to rest, he hit the floor, his price to pay. The feast of food and drink he guessed, consumed too quick, could not digest. Next time he’ll try the chicken breast, next time he’ll try the chicken breast. Copyright © 2003 Lori Kanter ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Aug 5 03, 18:59
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Lori,
sure you are not Mrs. Frost. Mustn't eat too fast, get agita. This has a nice finger-likkin' style to it. Musta made the beer in his micro-brewery. Cool. Larry a/k/a z2
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Aug 25 03, 02:44
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Dear Cleo
Some kind soul pointed me at this Punners Paradise, and I love this one ! I write mainly humorous, so will be here often, but just wanted to check there are no limit type rules here ? I tend to respond and crit anyway, but don't want to violate your guidelines, if there are any ! Love Alan |
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Aug 25 03, 05:05
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
QUOTE (Alan @ Aug. 25 2003, 03:44) Dear Cleo Some kind soul pointed me at this Punners Paradise, and I love this one ! I write mainly humorous, so will be here often, but just wanted to check there are no limit type rules here ? I tend to respond and crit anyway, but don't want to violate your guidelines, if there are any ! Love Alan This forum is a non-crit forum without the 1:3:2 rules. However, if a person *asks for a crit then kindly remind them to post in the 'Plato's Pearls' forums. They can also post here as well, but not for a crit... Make sense?   Cheers! ~Cleo 
······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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