 The Song Of Mistress La-Lash, For Arnnfinn - re: a bawdy night |
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 Sep 4 03, 18:54
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 2,587 Joined: 9-August 03 From: Australia Member No.: 17 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry  |
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 Young Chris.............Your always young at bawdy nights........even if your 92  The pain  The pain :laugh: Open invitation to attend the next BN at Ye Camelodian frolic.  :blush21: You wicked! wicked!  Free accommodation...........just bring the essentials Get your PR person to send a couple of dozen illustrated brochures and I'll post them in the drawbridge foyer................besides your poem of course. :laugh: :laugh: Loved your fun write  Arnie.................the.................  :StarWars1: :troy: :troy:
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Sep 4 03, 18:26
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 Assyrian  Posts: 153 Joined: 22-August 03 From: West Monroe, Louisiana Member No.: 20 Real Name: Chris Writer of: Poetry |
I made a comment to Arnie when replying to his poem about his " Bawdy Night". Told him he might enjoy this one.
  ( Those of you who have read this already, thank you for indulging me.  ) So here it is:The Song Of Mistress La-Lash Come over here and kiss me. Slide your fingers through my hair. Look into my eyes and say, how much you really care. Wrap your arms around me; trail your hands along my spine. Brush your silky lips upon each eye and tell me I'm sublime. Let me feel you quiver, as I'm held in your embrace, then drop upon one knee and say, you've finally learned your place. When you have pleased my passions, and shown me your respect. I'll reward your meager efforts with the treat that you expect. I'll give you what you really want, the pleasure mixed with pain... . But the truth of your humility will bring me wealth and fame. There are many like you, who keep secret their desires. They all come to have me fan, those smoky hidden fires. They come here domineering, but I teach them to submit, and when they finally leave me, they have a smile upon their lips. When next you come to visit, know that your secrets I will keep. Just put some money by the lash, and place a kiss upon my feet.  PS. The character " Mistress La-Lash " was inspired by ' Claw' over at PK.
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Sep 4 03, 19:01
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Hey, hey, Morgan le Fay,
I really liked this jewel. Second stanza glitched a little, but maybe the entry is a hard act to follow. I also might debate a few enjambments, but totally awesome my dear. I will bring a golden urn; a certain fire shall flash. Intense passion best burn in a precious place for ash. Don ... 
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Sep 4 03, 19:26
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
What can I say other than "AWESOME comeback M!"
Love it! Cheers! :cloud9: ~Cleo :pharoah2 ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
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Sep 5 03, 22:06
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Assyrian Posts: 153 Joined: 22-August 03 From: West Monroe, Louisiana Member No.: 20 Real Name: Chris Writer of: Poetry |
Hi everyone!
Glad you enjoyed your lashing! ( heh-heh )Arnie: Thanks for stopping by! I'm very pleased that you got a chuckle out of this. I thought that you might. And in the words of " Jethro Tull," you're never to old to rock and roll, just to young to die." Thanks again 'Arnie the Finn'. It was my pleasure.  Hi Don: I'm so pleased that you stopped by!  Your warm words brightened my day!  And thank you for including your very own version of " Ode To A Grecian Urn!" I enjoyed it very much. Your the first man to ever send me a poem! Hello Miss Cleo: Thanks for joining the party! :pharoah2  What can I say, " The made me do it! Well Zeus my friend! Hmmmmm, you say, " you feel like you've experienced this before?" I wasn't gonna tell. Now you've gone and blown your cover!  Thanks for stopping by big guy! It was my pleasure to see you!  Love and stuff, Morgan le Fay Mistress of Magic 
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Sep 5 03, 13:13
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Well!!! ms Le Fay
I do declare, a bawdy nite. :juggle: Feel like I experienced this before. Keep em' coming. Z2 :detective: |
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