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Aphrodite
post Aug 19 03, 08:14
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Resplendent crispy stirring leaves,
drop softly toward the ground.
Within bright beauty through the trees,
soft pastels “hush” the sound.

Twirling, whirling, holding tight
smooth contours; windspun song.  
Fluttering breezes, foliage flight    
drift dancers clinging long.

Matchless outlines tinted deep,
peach, crimson; vista’s bliss.
Blended gold-lime sundries seep
dyed bouquets; nature’s kiss.

Waltzing freefall takes its course,
Fall’s season shortly ages.
Reminders flash away with force,
calm Autumn’s vivid stages.


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post Aug 19 03, 11:47
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Absolutely stunning Lindi! Artist.gif

Course, Autum is also my favorite season! I love the way the leaves do 'waltz on air'...twirling and dancing....... Tigger.gif

This is filled with color and imagery so complete for the setting. One of my new Aphrodite favorites!
I hope you'll win that weekly contest for this one!  ???

Thanks for adding another lovely tile to our Mosaic in style!

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post Aug 19 03, 12:20
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QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Aug. 19 2003, 11:47)
Absolutely stunning Lindi! Artist.gif

Course, Autum is also my favorite season! I love the way the leaves do 'waltz on air'...twirling and dancing....... Tigger.gif

This is filled with color and imagery so complete for the setting. One of my new Aphrodite favorites!
I hope you'll win that weekly contest for this one!  ???

Thanks for adding another lovely tile to our Mosaic in style!

HUGS!
~Cleo  lovie.gif  dance.gif  sun.gif

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You are so sweet. Truly, if I won that would be a blessing, but I mostly love to "keep-up" with the writing. The challenges get us to write.....right? I enjoy them so. Can't wait to get into more of them here!!!!!!!
Anyway, I do appreciate your kind words, and I hope that you put one of your beauties into the challenge, too.

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post Aug 19 03, 16:40
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QUOTE (Aphrodite @ Aug. 19 2003, 08:14)
Resplendent crispy stirring leaves,
drop softly toward the ground.
Within bright beauty through the trees,
soft pastels “hush” the sound.

Twirling, whirling, holding tight
smooth contours; windspun song.  
Fluttering breezes, foliage flight    
drift dancers clinging long.

Matchless outlines tinted deep,
peach, crimson; vista’s bliss.
Blended gold-lime sundries seep
dyed bouquets; nature’s kiss.

Waltzing freefall takes its course,
Fall’s season shortly ages.
Reminders flash away with force,
calm Autumn’s vivid stages.

Hi again Aphrodite

Well you sure have done it again....this is wonderful. sun.gif  Guitar.gif  lovie.gif

The images you have presented here are breathtaking JackBox.gif

I particularly love
" waltzing freefall"

"swirling wirling"

"autumn's vivid stages"......Ooooh and lots more!

I also think the rhythm flows beautifully. Juggle.gif



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post Aug 21 03, 08:26
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QUOTE (Eisa @ Aug. 19 2003, 16:40)
QUOTE (Aphrodite @ Aug. 19 2003, 08:14)
Resplendent crispy stirring leaves,
drop softly toward the ground.
Within bright beauty through the trees,
soft pastels “hush” the sound.

Twirling, whirling, holding tight
smooth contours; windspun song.  
Fluttering breezes, foliage flight    
drift dancers clinging long.

Matchless outlines tinted deep,
peach, crimson; vista’s bliss.
Blended gold-lime sundries seep
dyed bouquets; nature’s kiss.

Waltzing freefall takes its course,
Fall’s season shortly ages.
Reminders flash away with force,
calm Autumn’s vivid stages.

Hi again Aphrodite

Well you sure have done it again....this is wonderful. sun.gif  Guitar.gif  lovie.gif

The images you have presented here are breathtaking JackBox.gif

I particularly love
" waltzing freefall"

"swirling wirling"

"autumn's vivid stages"......Ooooh and lots more!

I also think the rhythm flows beautifully. Juggle.gif



Read you again
Eisa lovie.gif

Hello Eisa~

Thanks, for the sparkling comments!
I do appreciate your kind words, very much.

In love~
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post Sep 4 03, 18:01
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Very fine, and easily takes one through
autumn's delights and memories.

Appreciating your comfort,
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post Sep 4 03, 18:05
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Your action is so very good with autumn life,
thanks.

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post Sep 5 03, 13:46
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QUOTE (Brahms @ Sep. 04 2003, 18:01)
Very fine, and easily takes one through
autumn's delights and memories.

Appreciating your comfort,
Brahms

Hello Brahms~(S)

Thanks, so much for the nice response to my Autumn poem!

I really appreciate you stopping by. Read.gif

Blessings~
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post Sep 5 03, 13:47
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QUOTE (Brahms @ Sep. 04 2003, 18:05)
Your action is so very good with autumn life,
thanks.

Brahms

Hey Brahms~

Again, I thank you for such kind remarks!

Blessings~ sun.gif  sun.gif  sun.gif  sun.gif  sun.gif  sun.gif
Lindi


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post Oct 19 03, 14:25
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Hi Lindi.


It's a wonderful rhyme scheme and the imagery is perfect.

Makes me wonder though!

Who's going to sweep up all of those leaves?

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