 Jasmine's Revenge |
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| Guest_Jox_* |
  Sep 29 03, 12:29
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Brahms, my dear chap! Thank you very much indeed. I understood all that except "layering treats" - I've only heard of layering in terms of hair treatment. However, I can see this is a food dish. So I see what you mean.
My very best to you, too. |
  
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Oct 11 03, 17:25
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Hi Stephen!
What a glorious poem for the kitty! :dance: Multiple meaning here and I like it! Thanks for sharing! :pharoah2 ~Cleo :pharoah: ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
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| Guest_Brahms_* |
 Sep 29 03, 09:38
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G'morn, Jox, and thanks looking o'er me poem.
Seventh Day are an American conservative religious group who tire some, and Graham is a mild tasting cracker type good for layering treats. Me best to you, Brahms |
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| Guest_Brahms_* |
Sep 28 03, 22:53
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Jasmine was a luxuriant kitten long of soft and black hair,
a fellow of higher means despite daughter's misnaming someday Jasmine would have his way. He was so insistent, demanding to have what this kitten pleased of any in store, including the food of half rotweiler/half shepherd someday Jasmine would have his way. Have company come by, longing for that private time enjoying the couch, singly shared, now clawing lap someday Jasmine would have his way. Have company walk by hide-a-bed, wrapped with cover thick with woven pattern of coloured design laced by swiping claw someday Jasmine would have his way. Have young daughter happy to gain joy with her friend, and offer all the more pleasure with thick graham'd suprise treat swiped someday Jasmine would have his way. Have the cat so bratty he became bathroom locked, waylaying counter-held shelf slid out to block the door, opened by prying knife someday Jasmine would have his way. Have that Seventh-Day couple come by again, unfailing words arrive knocking this moment, opening front door holding same knife to never return Jasmine did have his way. |
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| Guest_Jox_* |
Sep 29 03, 04:58
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Hi Brahms,
Though I did not understand all the references (Seventy Day? - bible? - religious group? and who is Graham?) I enjoyed this. I like the twist in Jasmin's tail! Cheers, Jox. |
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| Guest_Brahms_* |
Oct 12 03, 00:11
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Thanks, Cleo, for this was just a dash of fun for
a past friend. You know how that is, Brahms |
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| Guest__* |
Oct 22 03, 15:08
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Hi Stephen
So this kitten was a tom cat misnamed 'Jasmine' by your daughter. Now that, like Johnny Cash's character, is sure to start him off in life pretty mad. This little guy seems almost anti-social.  These Seventh Day people. They would be Seventh Day Evangelists? Sometimes called Seventh Day Adventists We have lots of those. Full of doom and gloom and self righteousness. Tiresome is an understatement. Throw them to the lions. Or Jasmine the Terrible. A fun read eliciting a fun response A |
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| Guest_Brahms_* |
Oct 23 03, 11:43
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Yo, A, a fun resonse to a cowboy kind of cat who seemed
like one of the street gang leaders in West Side Story. He simply was one who was in charge, Brahms |
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