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post Oct 24 03, 02:44
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Dear Z

Quite an accomplihment !

To produce a funny poem which can engender such even funnier responses !

Reminds me of Christian Morganstern's The Night Song of Fishes.

Love
Alan
 
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post Oct 26 03, 18:34
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Alan,
Its all in the one's and zero's. They have built in charms to tickle the funny bone. Could be the shapes or size or their appearance. Glad you could get a binary feel for this. Our actions at the PC so depend upon them, so be kind. Must also apply this to the DNA genome factor too, the GCAT codes have much to do with this.
A happy 101001 to you.
Larry z man Wall.gif
 
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post Oct 23 03, 11:27
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Tom, you young scaliwag, the above sonnet was brought forth by my DNA human genome markers which are marked thusly and in a double tet form and arranged with my creative ability:
PS the daDUMS are all arranged correctly in binary fashion Juggle.gif

GCTATT
TATGGCTACC
CATATTGATTCA
GATCTACTTCGGATT
AAATTTGCTTAATGCAAAG
GGATTCTAGCCTATCCATG
CCAATTGGATTCGAG
ATGGACCTAGCG
GTATTCGGTA
TAGCTC

Your humble god, Larry Z

 
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post Oct 23 03, 10:56
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Dammitall Z. How many times do you have to be told.

Iambic pentameter. The beat is way off!  
dance.gif Di Dah Di Dah Di Dah Di Dah Di Dah  dance.gif

Look at that volta. Shame on you. Wall.gif

One final crit.
The rhyme scheme is out of sync.
ABBA  ABBA CDE CDE
Lor, some people never learn. Pharoah.gif


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post Oct 23 03, 11:32
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post Oct 23 03, 18:07
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Thousand Pardons, Oh Queen of the Nile,

It should have been geekette.
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post Oct 23 03, 07:39
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  Sonnet Dedicated To:
Computer Nerds, Geeks, Dorks and Hackers

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1101001010100010011111010001010101010000111
0101000011110101010110101110011001100101
01010000111101010101101011100110011001010001

1101001010100010011111010001010101010000
0101000011110101010110101110011001100101111101
010100001111010101011010111001100110010111
11011001010100001110100101100101001001111001

0101000011110101010110101110011001100101
1101001010100010011111010001010101010000111110
010100001111010101011010111001100110010111
00110010101111000001110101001111000111011110000

0101000011110101010110101110011001100101
1010100001111010101011010111001100110010111
 
 
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