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May 18 23, 11:32
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My glass duck doesn’t Chirp, Cluck or Quack with a garden hose screwed in its crack. Water sprays from its bill with a whistle, quite shrill as it’s rotating forth and then back.
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May 22 23, 05:30
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rotten tater pulled forth then thrown back in the ground; he would rather face lack than to bite that moist spud he'll just chew on his cud and then open a can of hard tack
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May 26 23, 10:55
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I’ve not heard of hard tack being canned. It’s supply far outstrips the demand which has waned from creation of good dehydration. It is food but the taste is quite bland.
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May 28 23, 07:01
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If the hardtack you've chewed on is bland then perhaps you might try a new brand You could take a good chaw in the side of your maw as you'll see that this Hardtacck is canned!
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May 29 23, 11:06
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If that Hardtack is canned, I will see whether it tastes much better to me but until I can taste my doubts won’t be erased. If it is then I guess I’d agree.
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May 30 23, 14:04
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Chawed tobacco will not taste as great as the typical food on your plate but the feel of a chaw there inside of your jaw could incite you to maul your next date
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Jun 1 23, 11:24
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I once went to a mall with my date to find rings, to propose; be my mate but there’s no place to go just like San Francisco; all the stores have now moved out of state.
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Jun 1 23, 13:46
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What happened to the "Add Reply" Tab and such?!
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Jun 1 23, 20:55
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Daniel, this is only happening in the limerick panel. I sent a message to Lori about it but no reply or fix as of yet. The box is extremely wide so you need to put your curser at the bottom and run to the right.
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Jun 2 23, 00:53
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When the stores in your state have moved out you should find a replacement, no doubt, but there's no guarantee that you'll find something free so just shop there and cut out the pout!
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Jun 3 23, 21:35
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I don’t pout when I’m out shopping lees in the stores that close doors to appease. Just don’t bring it down south; you’ll get punched in the mouth pushing sexual proclivities.
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Jun 4 23, 09:13
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Pushing sex you're all pro libertines? I should think you'd be pro in-betweens since you're all grouchy grumps come from ancient mug-wumps who eat lunches of mixed salad greens!
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Jun 8 23, 14:28
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If you’re lunching on mixed salad greens a new diet could be what that means. You just bought some new clothes that don’t fit. Heaven knows you would like to try out those tight jeans.
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Jun 8 23, 15:06
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wearing tight jeans it clearly now out 'cause they don't come with one leg, no doubt and to go from wheel chair to the toilet would scare since disrobing would be quite a bout
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Jun 11 23, 11:21
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Quite about your disrobing would be a surprise. I’d spout profanity! Learn to rise, dress and walk; I believe I would balk and then try “bottom-half nudity”!
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Jun 12 23, 21:12
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bottom-half nudity 'neath a sheet is my practice at home; it's quite neat unless bowels run wild and the floor is defiled under wheelchair as it makes retreat
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Jun 19 23, 10:46
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When your wheelchair retreats, is the floor just as neat as it was once before? With that known, I’d suggest a bed-pan might be best. It’s an option which you may explore.
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Jun 20 23, 21:29
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It's an option that we may explore though a bed-pan's one thing I deplore It can smell up a room with a skunkish perfume and to mount it can oft be a chore
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Jun 25 23, 11:11
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Often things are a chore to surmount and these days, there’s more than one can count. But persistence will pay with success every day for some faith and a prayer are the fount.
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Jun 29 23, 10:25
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If while praying you change your new font, end with "Amen" and chomp your croissant I must wonder if you after drinking your brew will regret you were so nonchalant.
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