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Mar 9 16, 12:57
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Pale horses
set the pace
for my dream
in the twilight.
I hear engines hum
as I tramp the river bank.
My mind has turned violet now
as I grasp the fact of denoument
and cringe,
realizing what I strive for,
yes,
is dissolving.
tramp
violet
horses
twilight
pale
hum
pace
strive
cringe
grasp
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Very cool and intriguing poem Richard. You used the 10 words well.
These word challenges can definitely stimulate the gray cells, can they?
Would look over the punctuation, if I were you (see L6 especially).
I can see this going to the crit boards easily.
Luce
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Hello RC,
interesting images spring into mind.
The last - dissolving - makes me hope there isn't a wet spot left behind while dreaming.
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