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 Babylonian  Posts: 102 Joined: 22-June 17 From: Arizona, USA Member No.: 5,325 Real Name: Ali Zonak Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:none  |
Cornflowers and Poppies
When I was young, I saw first love in waving fields of wheat correction: "in fields of waving wheat" Thank you, Eira! still safe from reapers’ scythes. So lovely was your face— with cornflower eyes that shone in heaven’s blue. And your lips— those lips, kissed by the summer sun—how they glowed in poppy red as I embraced you with my brush’s strokes. At harvest time came sharpened blades, and all your beauty fell to naught before my gaze, till I beheld a barren stubble field, soon plowed and buried in the soil— But let no plowshare lay to rest my painted memories of you. ·······  ·······~~~~
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Ali zonak Cornflowers and Poppies ** Jul 27 17, 10:52 
Eisa Hi Ali,
I love the beautiful descriptions in this... Jul 28 17, 16:49 Ali zonak QUOTE (Eisa @ Jul 28 17, 17:49 ) Hi Ali,
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