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Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews _ Poetry Education -> Karnak Crossing _ Poetry Exercise #3
Posted by: Cleo_Serapis Mar 21 04, 12:07
What would do if you could be invisible for 24 hours?
Where would you go?
What do you think you'll see or hear that you wouldn't normally?
Would you 'spy' on someone at work in a meeting (like your boss)?
Perhaps you'd follow someone around?
Remember all the times you've said, "I wish I could be a fly on the wall!"
Now's your chance to imagine what goes on...
Write out a scene in poetic style of your day as an invisible.
Good luck! :cheer:
Mosaic Musings Staff :knight:
Posted by: Cleo_Serapis Mar 29 04, 20:47
No takers yet on this one?
HHMmmm - I'll be writing something when time permits... :)
Posted by: JustDaniel May 21 04, 11:45
Am I
not visible?
No matter where I am
it seems to take an awful lot
of effort to imagine that a thing
so insignificant as eye
should e’er be crossing t’s
…not dotting yours…
am I?
© M Lee Dickens’ son 21 May 2004
Posted by: Cleo_Serapis May 21 04, 16:41
Am I
not visible?
No matter where I am
it seems to take an awful lot
of effort to imagine that a thing
so insignificant as eye
should e’er be crossing t’s
…not dotting yours…
am I?
© M Lee Dickens’ son 21 May 2004
Hey Daniel! :sun:
This is AWESOME! :tut:
Let me congratulate you on being the first to respond to this exercise! BRAVO! :cheer: :cloud9:
You have been missed friend! :cali:
HUGS!
~Cleo
Posted by: JustDaniel Jun 8 04, 06:19
to be
invisible
where no one sees the fool
whose jest a wee bit too much touched
might better be than flailing all about
where passers seldom drop a pence
into his tasseled hat?
to be or not
to be
© M Lee Dickens’ son 08 June 2004
Posted by: Don Jun 8 04, 12:35
to be
invisible
where no one sees the fool
whose jest a wee bit too much touched
might better be than flailing all about
where passers seldom drop a pence
into his tasseled hat?
to be or not
to be
© M Lee Dickens’ son 08 June 2004
I not only like your verse, but must drop a virtual pence into your hat.
Glad to see you here again.
Don
Posted by: JustDaniel Jun 9 04, 04:50
thank you for not keeping me in sus-pence, Don! It's a joy to see you pass by!
deLightedly, Daniel :sun:
Posted by: face Jul 27 04, 15:15
abandonment[B]
he stole
her heart
touched
her soul
freed
her mind
seduced
her body
awakened
her passions
and then
he
went away
left her
invisible and
alone
with
herself
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