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Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews _ ARCHIVES -> Poetry for Exhibition Prior to 2006 _ Tears ' ' ' ' '

Posted by: Zeus² Sep 16 04, 06:55

Tears….

Tears
keep
f
a
l
l
i
n
g
like leaves,
down
into
the depths
of my soul,

It was so sudden
did not see it coming
though there were signs,

were so successful
up to that time
we were happy,

then, little things
began to occur
mistakes were made,

argument began
to rear its ugly head
clear minded
we were not,

we knew
the end was near
never to be
the same again,

excuses
don’t make amends
can we still be
together?

time will tell
changes to be made
there is always
forgiveness,

what do we say
to all,
have faith
someday
we will learn
from our mistakes.

Niners’ 39- Giants’38 (2002)

Posted by: Cleo_Serapis Sep 19 04, 08:49

Now I remember this one Lar!

Excellent - I'll add your "Red Zone" also!
Thankies!
~Cleo

Posted by: Tao Sep 19 04, 14:29

Hi there, official spokeman for the NFC! You get telecasts on the mount or do you just hover over the stadium with a gods-eye view?

There's always next year...tell it to the Boston Red Sox or Detroit Lions! Those poor fans...at least the Giants won a Superbowl a few years ago.

David

Posted by: heartsong7 Sep 26 04, 12:16

What a treat! I didn't know to the end this was about football.
Well done!
Sue