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> Quiet Friends ~ ~ a Nonet, X 10 for October 31
JustDaniel
post Nov 15 17, 11:53
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Quiet Friends

one
moment
since my fall
and all laughter
turns to a whisper
as my friends discover
me flat on my back; they wrap
my aching, swollen ankle, transport
me to where my soul can rest in dreams


Challenge words, in order of appearance: moment, fall, laughter, whisper, friend(s), discover, wrap, ach(ing), soul, dream(s)


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Larry
post Nov 15 17, 14:22
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Hi Daniel,

Nicely done on the Nonet. Hope the fall hasn't happened recently.

Too bad you couldn't have made it a double acrostic Nonet. That would definitely have been a challenge.


Larry


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