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 May 9 14, 13:52
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 Egyptian  Posts: 369 Joined: 10-May 11 From: Outskirts of Sonoran Desert Member No.: 4,480 Real Name: JerryK Writer of: Poetry & Prose  |
Erotica (Note: this one had my easy-to-laugh bride of 45 years in stitches)
How shall I greet her this morning? See? Here is dawn, reaching out to us. Naughty Eros! Do not let your rosy fingers linger all-too-long upon my lady’s lovely form; I am a jealous lover. She is awake; how do I approach her? One moment I can be as gentle as May’s caressing zephyrs--gently kissing her throat and lips—but then I turn into coarse Vulcan--demanding; forceful, yet groveling at my Aphrodite’s feet. Oh, she will resist me--for the briefest moment. |
  
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May 10 14, 14:00
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Hi Jerry - I'm glad this had your wife in stitches. It has certainly brought a smile to my face and lightened my mood. This is amazing - very cleverly written.
I love the way you have included the Greek gods - works very well. I cannot nit this at all, just admire your skill and humour Keep them coming, Jerry! Snow  ·······  ·······Live one day at a time -it's simpler that way.
Laugh loud & often - it's medicinal. Write from the heart - it's therapeutic. Beauty comes from within - the outer is just skin! Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here! MM Award Winner            |
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May 10 14, 16:55
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Egyptian Posts: 369 Joined: 10-May 11 From: Outskirts of Sonoran Desert Member No.: 4,480 Real Name: JerryK Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Thanks for your kind words, Snow;
yeah, whenever she sees that silly smile on my face as I type away, oh, she knows there's some silliness forthcoming. Not to forget those crazy gods; they keep me laughing. Your comment pleases me without end. Thanks again,  Jerry |
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May 12 14, 04:35
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 1,621 Joined: 18-August 05 From: Johannesburg, South Africa Member No.: 127 Real Name: Beverleigh Gail Annegarn Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Jox |
Hello Jerry
Loved it. And love the fact that your bride still laughs! Bev ······· ······· |
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May 12 14, 07:12
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Egyptian Posts: 369 Joined: 10-May 11 From: Outskirts of Sonoran Desert Member No.: 4,480 Real Name: JerryK Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hi Bev;
it's good to see you again, and I'm glad you read this sonnet from a "youthful" . . . 79-year old codger. Therefore alone "she" laughs her head off at my nonsense. Thank you, Bev.  Jerry |
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