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Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews _ Chapbook Competition -> Odin's Opposition _ So In Love (Swap Quatrain)

Posted by: JLY Nov 15 10, 07:01


We cherish romance, we joyfully dance;
tonight we'll tempt a passionate stance
as starlit ribbons reflect a lovers trance;
we joyfully dance, we cherish romance.

Desires are burning, soaring to extremes,
a stardust afterglow spirits our dreams,
sweet, precious charms spell a yearning
soaring to extremes, desires are burning.

Your candied red lips I fervently pursue.
I'm captivated, bewildered, have no clue;
a bit dazed, I can't muster catchy quips,
I fervently pursue your candied red lips.

Paradise is your embrace, heavenly serene,
you loving me, there's never any in between,
no faux ecstasies, no foolish, futile chase;
heavenly serene, paradise is your embrace.

Temptation thrives in a rapturous tone,
dulcet voices echo in an amorous zone,
as caressive emotions indulge our lives;
in a rapturous tone, temptation thrives.

I'm so in love with you, what can I do?
My body is shaky, my senses are askew...
beguiled by your tempting eyes of blue,
what can I do, I am so in love with you.

Posted by: Cleo_Serapis Nov 15 10, 09:50

Thank you for your entry into Odin's Opposition, John! troy.gif

Perhaps you'll rise up, drink from the Well of Wisdom and be crowned the 'bringer of victory'? cali.gif

Best of luck in the battle! vic.gif

~Mosaic Musings Staff knight.gif

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