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Jul 26 18, 20:48
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smell reeks
scents clear most rooms that are enclosed because they make lungs ache from all the perfume’s rank liquids
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Aug 11 18, 14:01
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leave soapy
liquids ease us into a peaceful area very slowly but make skin chap easy
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EASED YARNS
easy at Atlanta story-telling chapter each Saturday and Sunday noon: Dude Yarns
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Aug 12 18, 18:34
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darns socks
dudes yarns are doubled so real small holes in an arc never increase in holy sock sizes
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Aug 14 18, 11:56
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SABER SCARS
sizes are but basic battle memoria each warrior shows with ev'ry scar... recalls
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Aug 15 18, 14:48
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rider stops
recalls increased to get defective old auto expensive replacements in shop repairs
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Aug 28 18, 09:14
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RISKS SHAFT
repairs it all with some duct tape tucked in a kind of rusted pot metal half socket
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Aug 30 18, 08:28
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I played around to pun on cinquain to make it Cain's sin:
My hand once held a stone that was harder than hate, its scalloped edge was knapped to rip your flesh.
Anger, scalded my lips. I sang you songs of death. Yet now, I kneel down beside you to taste
the wounds that are your head, to give my heat to you, to sing no hate, to use no stone. I sound
my heart and I wonder why we shared a mother? When you were not at all like me. Brother.
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Aug 30 18, 12:55
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Hi Jax,
You did a very nice job with your series of Cinquains to tell the story of the first murder recorded in the Bible. I enjoyed your "Cain's" viewpoint and the remorse he must have felt after the deed was done.
Question: Did you mean "heat" in the last Cinquain or is it a typo and should have read "heart"?
Thanks, Larry
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Aug 30 18, 12:57
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Hey Daniel, if you are as surprised as I was with Jax's entry then join the club. I will continue on with our string with this double acrostic Cinquain:
shoes to fit
sock it heavily so our big shoes won’t fall off each step we take and e coli stays out
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Sep 6 18, 12:54
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sober trait
stays out ordering for bar patrons who might plea earnings to be an alibi regret…
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Sep 26 18, 17:56
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rites teach
regret is always fine to help clean your aura except when an honest skeptic sees through
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Oct 9 18, 10:42
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stare heats
sees through the sheer nightie and the front area reveals all so what you now want enflames
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Oct 18 18, 21:38
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event sears
enflames varied people, engulfing area needed for souls of the sinner that preys
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Nov 6 18, 23:55
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tired skunk
that spray’s impact is quick, regardless of how you escaped its path and then tried to debunk
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Nov 20 18, 12:40
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debunk sleeping quarters where the ranch hands can rest and make it more roomy and eyes rheumy
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Dec 4 18, 08:50
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reads years
rheumy eyes come with age and swimming in the sea, despite warnings that you are near some sharks
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Dec 12 18, 15:49
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short snack
some sharks have a slow human or ones that go to sea; regarding them as a picnic they pick
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Dec 15 18, 09:15
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leftovers
toothpicks help clean your teeth after pulled pork sandwich; if you like, you can even eat the bits
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Dec 17 18, 16:12
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takes sides
the bits and pieces I kept have now departed, each shell carried away inside soft waves
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