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Oct 23 03, 04:19
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Add a line from a well klnown poem or one from MM which makes you think "I wish I'd Said That"
Then is my heart buried alive in snow (Translation from the Sanskrit)
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Oct 24 03, 04:05
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"troubled hearts grasp numbing anesthetics"From MM Aphrodite's poem, Bursting Light. I WISH I'D SAID THAT!
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Oct 24 03, 04:11
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"While tainted words are bled, this rose still seethes"
From MM's ladyriles. You can find this line in her poem, Truth's Naivety, currently in the forum, "Socrate's Synapse".
I WISH I'D SAID THAT!
~Cleo :pharoah2
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Oct 29 03, 02:27
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"The world swirls, swells with beauty's range"
'As Seasons Settle' by Orion (Posted in Homer's Homilies)
Congratulations Orion - a very beautiful line
Grace
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Nov 4 03, 11:58
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your gentle hand stroked my tarnished confidence Extract from 'Ambrosia' by Aphrodite.
Very beautiful line Lindi Love Grace
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Nov 5 03, 00:51
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Waltzing Leaves - an Acrostic by Cleo
Waltzing in whirls of kaleidoscope tint, Lovely, lovely line Cleo Cheers Grace
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Nov 9 03, 04:11
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Each zenith gained, expands horizon’s view; Elevation 24/7 by Michelle
Your can read this in Homers Homilies
Great line Michelle
Grace
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Nov 23 03, 09:55
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"In you I see, a grandiose potpourri, of abundant loving qualities, that exude a rich vitality."
From JLY's "The Sparkling Jewel That Is You" located presently in Pandora's Box forum - 2nd Nov Challenge
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Nov 23 03, 09:59
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"Sparkling--like an evening’s quest mirrored in a glassy garden."
From AMETHYST's "The Winter of You..."
LOVELY LIZ!
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Oct 22 03, 11:53
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to wake, knowing
is this morn's response, knowing the bard in each our lives knows so much so better.
Brahms
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Oct 22 03, 11:56
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Brilliant reply, Stephen!
I wish I'd said that!
James.
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Oct 22 03, 14:50
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And then my heart with pleasure fills, And dances with the daffodils. - William Wordsworth
I just LOVE this part of his poem, "I wandered Lonely as a Cloud"!!!
I WISH I'D SAID THAT!
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Oct 22 03, 17:06
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While I wish I had said any one thing the Alfred Tennyson said, this is not only my favorite of his, but of all poetry I've ever read.
CIRCUMSTANCE Two children in two neighbor villages Playing mad pranks along the heathy leas; Two strangers meeting at a festival; Two lovers whispering by an orchard wall: Two lives bound fast in one with golden ease; Two graves grass-green beside a gray church-tower, Wash’d with still rains and daisy-blossomed; Two children in one hamlet born and bred: So runs the round of life from hour to hour.
Dan
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Nov 25 03, 03:04
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It’s the kind of morning to close eyes while leaning Heavenward on tiptoes.
Inhaling deeply, I almost lose my balance.
Sunday Morning Solitude by Orion in Homers Homilies
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Nov 26 03, 05:35
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The point-of- sale barker, In the aisle of natural selection
From BRAIN POWER by JOX in Socrates Synapse.
Brilliant metaphor James!!
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Nov 26 03, 07:26
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My fingers entwine themselves around his over-cracked knuckles. His rumbling laughter dies after mine.
From Specks by Jessica in Socrates Synapse
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Nov 26 03, 16:01
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"she glances up as a compassionate stranger passes her a dollar, tears flowing down her numb pink cheek, she thanks, for giving."
From Aphrodite's "Thanks, for Giving" curently located in Homer's Homilies.
Very heart-warming Lindi! :snowflake:
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Nov 26 03, 16:15
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"The bleeding drops of dew pour softly down"
from Alan's "NET BOUND" currently located in Socrates Synapse.
Excellent!
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Nov 28 03, 01:58
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for time has tied its ribbons through her mind;
From "Alzheimer's" by Eisa in Homer's Homilies. An absolutely 'must read' poem.
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Nov 29 03, 19:28
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"Crooked tree trunks, with their limbs gnarled, deformed and bent, scratching the sky with bony, arthritic fingers."
---Cybele, "The Apple Orchard" in Homers Homilies.
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