Group: Gold Member
Joined: 15-June 07
From: Springfield, Louisiana
Member No.: 446
Not sure about your problem with enjambments and the only way I might be able to alleviate that is to use the French version of 8 and 6 instead of the 3 quatrains and couplet. I wish you would clarify your statement about the inversion in the final couplet. The first line is a continuation of the sentence in the prior line and the last line is my summation or viewpoint of the way things are as I see them.
Thanks for chiming in and let me know a bit more of your thoughts.