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 Mar 18 08, 10:22
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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends  |
A WARNING TO POTENTIAL BHUDDISM RECRUITS
The eternal cycle of life and death is as nothing Compared to the eternal cycle of tea, and pee Alan McAlpine Douglas ·······  ······· |
  
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Mar 20 08, 06:21
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Ornate Oracle  Posts: 4,592 Joined: 31-October 03 From: New Jersey Member No.: 39 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Larry Carr |
Alan,
Moving this poem to the appropriate forum is about the only help you will need. This is short, to the point and the message is obviously clear. JLY ······· ·······Give thanks for your new friends of today, but never forget the warm hugs of your yesterdays.
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Mar 25 08, 07:11
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Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends |
Dear John,
Thank you ! Love Alan ······· ······· |
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Mar 31 08, 03:48
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
This gave me a good giggle this morning Alan - and it's so true!
The eternal cycle of life and death is as nothing Compared to the eternal cycle of tea, and pee I'm not sure if I'd start st2 with a capital, perhaps a comma after 'nothing' - and full stop after 'pee'. Well I had a cuppa about an hour ago, so excuse me if I leave you .... LOL! Snow 
······· ·······Live one day at a time -it's simpler that way.
Laugh loud & often - it's medicinal. Write from the heart - it's therapeutic. Beauty comes from within - the outer is just skin! Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here! MM Award Winner      |
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Apr 5 08, 01:44
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Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends |
DearSnow,
Thank you, lol. A good giggle was not all it gave you. I thought about the lower case "C", but somehow it would not look right. I don't cap each line, but chose to cap each stanza. Love Alan ······· ······· |
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