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Unison, MM's 10th Holiday Classic

K.S. Lenk View Member Profile Find Member's Posts	Dec 19 15, 05:35 Post #1
Babylonian Group: Gold Member Posts: 78 Joined: 13-November 15 Member No.: 5,294 Real Name: Krista van der Steen Writer of: Poetry	Unison There was haste in all circling around town's centrepiece. The tree crowned the square like a triangular rooftop, its star still pale at early dusk. I found a seat underneath, cold metal slats a welcome rest, as the world washed by, almost choreographed in a ballet chorus line. Paper bags of gifts were cherished by shoppers, while smiles and handshakes uttered merry greetings. I tasted pudding, right there and then. A brief close of the eyes and a blue haze appeared, my children's faces never smiled so much. And the brush of the crowd against my shoulders and elbows, was the beat of the season, a pulsating message that we all felt the same.

Cleo_Serapis View Member Profile Find Member's Posts	Dec 19 15, 12:40 Post #2
Mosaic Master Group: Administrator Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep	Thank you for your Holiday entry, Krista! Best of luck! May the 'classic' holiday spirit be shared in your heart throughout the season! ~ Mosaic Musings Staff ·············· "It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life. MM Award Winner