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Senryu, Japanese form: 5-7-5 or less |
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Jul 31 17, 08:17
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fathers in the See could not be superior; nun was a mother
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Jul 31 17, 13:23
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Nun was a father; he was the progenitor of Joshua
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Aug 2 17, 23:49
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of Joshua’s kin there were too many numbered; only One counted
Just a note: Nun was also the name given the oldest “god” in Egypt and was purported to be the father of the Egyptian sun god. Nun was translated as “primeval waters” because the universe was in turmoil.
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Aug 3 17, 12:55
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only one counted playing the hide-and-seek game; all the rest went home
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Aug 4 17, 08:54
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all went home to rest from a hard day of playing; now they just don’t leave
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Aug 4 17, 10:00
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now they just don't leave; the branches reach out starkly from the dead, grey trunk
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Aug 4 17, 16:15
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from the dead, grey trunk comes a lot of good firewood; less leaves leave less mess
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Aug 4 17, 22:38
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less loaves leave less mess; bakery opts to shut down because workers loafed
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Aug 7 17, 07:43
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bees caused workers loafs to fly through the bakery; sweet breads hit the spot
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Aug 7 17, 16:39
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sweet breads hit the spot where angry bakers toss them; they demand more dough
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Aug 9 17, 09:16
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they demand more dough and some yeast to make it rise; beer works with pretzels
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Aug 9 17, 10:06
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dip pretzels in beer and they will come out soggy; best to use mustard
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Aug 10 17, 14:22
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mustard is used best as a flavor condiment; when frankly speaking
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Aug 10 17, 18:04
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if you're being frank it's quite hard to be furtive; you won't fit the roll
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Aug 11 17, 16:12
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when your roll won’t fit because of the beer you drank; it’s a hangover
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Aug 12 17, 02:49
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it's a hangover... and a small belt won't help you; just makes you tighter
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Aug 14 17, 14:34
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tighter makes you just able to take a deep breath; to wheeze you must ease
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Aug 14 17, 16:56
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wheezing is teasing your lungs to pneumonia; scarring can kill you
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Aug 16 17, 13:54
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you can kill scaring gullible older people; would that be fright end
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Aug 17 17, 12:56
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would be fry-tender but McDonald's fired me; dropped phone in the fat
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