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Beware The Hun In The Sun
by Jox (Writing as TC - # 145 AB)
October, 2003


“Reach for the skies!” He was told at school.
Don’t stay on the ground with the rest.
Be the genius; not anyone’s fool,
Always make sure you’re the very best!

"Head for the stars!” They said in College.
You must grasp living with both hands;
Here we give you the vital knowledge
To ensure that you soar above lands.

“Be aggressive,” Your instructor said.
You have to be amongst leaders;
Leave nothing to chance; to this be wed:
Trust your judgement, but also heed us.

“Up into the skies - you’re now solo.”
Young, brave  - determined to succeed.
Breathtakingly high; dangerously low;
Just to placate adrenalin greed.

“This isn’t happening, not to me.”
Your mind a whurr, your plane spinning,
The cannon ripped through, you hit the sea,
A star goes out, the heavens dimming.


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Sorry,I missed this sparkling award at the time.

I am very honoured. Thank you very much.

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