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Mar 9 15, 03:09
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of wind let us not speak lest we betray who it was that let one fly discretely but damp
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Mar 10 15, 14:17
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damp butt needs to be dried, cleaned, lotioned and powdered before the next flood fill the fresh diaper
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Mar 10 15, 16:47
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diapers are for seniors what condoms are for teens; each provides for a tenuous safety
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Mar 10 15, 23:32
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safety that's unengaged won't let a weapon fire, it takes somebody to lend it a hand
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Mar 11 15, 18:03
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big hand on the old clock decided not to move protesting that the little hand's lazy
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Mar 11 15, 22:49
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lace ease was invented for those who can't tie bows and he's so pleased he let out a veiled crow
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Mar 13 15, 16:32
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veiled crow hid from Scarecrow so he could caw at him to help rid him of his martyr complex
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Mar 15 15, 23:24
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complex mathematics can help people who figure but blockheads will always have square roots
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Mar 17 15, 17:03
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square roots from blonde to black at hair's origin point must think it irrisistible silly
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Mar 17 15, 23:01
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seals ease through the water with lots of speed and grace but born on land, they're all sons of beaches
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Mar 20 15, 01:54
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bitches who have puppies will have to produce milk and be willing to be sucked dry feeding
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Mar 20 15, 12:30
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feeling buried in snow and sick of wintertime, don't be trapped inside your home, use e-glue
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Mar 22 15, 12:15
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ick loo needs some cleaning; I'm too flushed to drain it into the back yard storm sewer system
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Mar 22 15, 23:03
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stems sigh when the wind blows if they're on a large tree, the trunk and its mature branches wood knot
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Mar 23 15, 16:17
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would naught carry more weight if there were aught in it? which weighs more: a ton of feathers, or steel?
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Mar 24 15, 14:39
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oars till the placid lake, rippling the still waters until it is difficult to reflect
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Mar 24 15, 15:56
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deflect each suggestion that you be sensible while you are composing your next cinquain
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Mar 24 15, 23:36
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Sorry, I was mentally pronouncing "paddling" in "Suthun" by thinking pad-dl-ing. It has been corrected.
Cinquain's are a strange lot consisting of odd names like the Tetractys, Cinqku, and Tanka
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Mar 25 15, 09:30
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tanka you for fixing what I hadn't noticed; my lame piece had noting to do with you!
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Mar 25 15, 13:19
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with yew you make long bows unless you're building ships then bows should be of oak to make you prowed
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