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 Apr 2 17, 17:04
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 Assyrian  Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy  |
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Sometimes here, seems far away, when you're in the lounge, early morning seems to orchestrate yet prevaricates, the possibility of personal change. Wish this could last, longer than a radio show; caught in this rare-field where there is no movement beyond these summoned thoughts Original Sometimes here, seems far away, when you're in the lounge, morning seems to orchestrate yet prevaricates, the possibility of personal change. Wish this could last, longer than a radio show; caught in this rare-field amber: where there is no movement beyond these thoughts summoned. ·······  ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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Nov 11 17, 20:39
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 Assyrian Posts: 250 Joined: 1-November 15 Member No.: 5,282 Real Name: richard chase Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Rhapsody |
I like "longer than a radio show" - good tongue in cheek description - brisk rhythm - well done - RC
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greenwich Testament Apr 2 17, 17:04 
Eisa Hi Antony - some random thoughts below
Eira
Some... Apr 12 17, 16:07 JustDaniel Greetings, friend:
Just some punctuation and a co... Jun 29 17, 07:48 greenwich The poem is about not sleeping and being in the lo... Jul 4 17, 09:44 Psyche Hi Anthony,
I hadn't seen this poem before. Be... Oct 1 17, 02:41 
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