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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori  |
Interactive Haiku, anyone?
Millie the farm horse her big brown eyes begging me; any mints today? - cybelle any mints today? only snow-crusted apples warm sun glistens frost - Daniel Warm sun glistens frost on a brisk morning of hope; Can you feel the air? - Cleo can you feel the air? it’s glistering with snow flakes breathed out from above - Daniel ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Jan 18 04, 04:54
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Dear Daniel
can you feel the air? it’s glistering with snow flakes breathed out from above breathed out from above God's seasons each in its turn except Florida Love Alan |
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Jan 18 04, 07:24
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Alan @ Jan. 18 2004, 03:54) Dear Daniel can you feel the air? it’s glistering with snow flakes breathed out from above breathed out from above God's seasons each in its turn except Florida Love Alan state of the south accept Florida; you can if you concentrate: frozen? orange juice! © Daniel J Ricketts 18 Jan 2004 Lightly snowed, Love, Daniel 
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Jan 18 04, 07:32
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Dear Daniel
You had me LOLling about "! A what a title ! Brazen orange juice is served with or without "bits", always in yer face ..... Love Alan |
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Jan 18 04, 07:45
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Dear Daniel,
 Not to spoil your initiative. Just trying to write again. in the hushed woodland Snow Moon points bone-white fingers; snowdrops nod gently Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace  http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner        |
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Jan 18 04, 08:54
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
OOOhhhhhhhh
 This looks fun!  Ok: in the hushed woodland Snow Moon points bone-white fingers; snowdrops nod gently Grace Snowdrops nod gently spredding white dust over trees; Pines give 'thanks' for coat. Cleo ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner   |
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Jan 18 04, 17:18
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Pineys: Thanks fer coat!
collar always in yer face, snowdrops gnawed gently deLightin' in y'all :sun: ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Jan 19 04, 03:02
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hi Daniel,
Still not able to think of witty follow-ons at present, so please skip over this one and continue the fun. full moon regarding its pale face in icy pond; true mirrored image Love Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Jan 21 04, 07:13
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Well!!! I never! Moon us, will ya, Grace!?
pale moon wan-skinned grace… she mooned from icy stair, pond… er…ring, both lobes reflecting © M Lee Dickens’ son (Daniel) 21 Jan 2004 Light cheekily, Daniel
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Jan 22 04, 03:06
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
onslaught of winter sprinkle of fine dandruff; the scarecrow buckles ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Jan 22 04, 04:51
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Cybele @ Jan. 22 2004, 02:06) onslaught of winter sprinkle of fine dandruff; the scarecrow buckles Awesome piece, Grace...and I got your note. Thank you for sharing; my heart is with you in the transition. Please feel free to email me? ... and I feel the grief in your haiku, Grace... winter slaps my face; darkness now shrouded in white soon melts to new life © Daniel J Ricketts 22 Jan 2004 sharin' de Light in darkness, Daniel
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Jan 24 04, 18:01
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The sweetness of full,
orange nectarines turns purple; the sun and moon waltz. |
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Jan 27 04, 09:01
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Con sensual
Lust posing as love turning a world inside out; bad feels good, pure dull. ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Jan 28 04, 03:45
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
winter stars glitter. .
sailor blows warmth in cupped hands dreaming of hot tea Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Jan 28 04, 15:04
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Purple violets
are warmed by children's laughter and the orange sunlight. |
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Jan 28 04, 20:38
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Flakes fall ubiased
sprinkling kisses of cool love to warm a shy smile. ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Jan 29 04, 01:42
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Good Morning Dove and Cleo,
Two lovely pieces, one colourful and cheery - the other soothing and loving. bouffant snowflakes swirl, the yellow-eyed cat crouches beneath a green car Love Grace 
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Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Jan 29 04, 02:05
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Delightful, Grace!
Won't you come and try our new interactic haiku, too? Blessings, Dolly 
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Jan 30 04, 02:07
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hello Dolly,
Thank you for your kind words. I shall keep looking in on the inter-active haiku and I will certainly join in again as soon as I feel able. At present though I am finding it a little hard to communicate in the true spirit of camaraderie and don't wish to spoil the fun for others. If I see one I feel I can tag on to without depressing everybody I shall. Love Grace
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Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Jan 30 04, 03:35
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
the snow covered roof
of the garden bird table; robins dining out ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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