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Haiku is one of the most important forms of traditional Japanese poetry. Haiku is, today, a 17-syllable verse form consisting of three metrical units of 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively.

Haiku (in English) usually appears as an unrhymed three-line verse. It should balance intense, fragmentary imagery with stress on rhythm and sound. Though it can be presented in three lines, a haiku structurally consists of two parts with a pause in between. The power behind it derives from the juxtaposition of the two images and the sense of surprise or revelation that the second image produces. A good haiku is like a good joke: the set-up, then the punch line.

In the broadest sense,Haiku is about Nature. In Japan, most haiku have a season word (Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, New Years) that links the poem with the vast, archetypal round of the Year of Life. Today, in place of the season word, some contemporary haiku poets use keywords that express common themes of human experience (for example, "mother"). This, however, is a matter of controversy in modern haiku.

Some examples of tradition Haiku are listed below by Japanese Poet, Kobayashi Issa for you to enjoy.

in falling rain
one man remains...
blossom shade

the cherry blossoms
that stirred me, shade me
no more

through falling snow
a spring breeze
blows

have you come
to save us haiku poets?
red dragonfly



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- Cleo_Serapis   Haiku   Aug 3 03, 16:40
- - Brahms   Seven sunrises bumping up Tolt River Road on the w...   Aug 28 03, 12:11
- - Aphrodite   QUOTE (Brahms @ Aug. 28 2003, 12:11)Seven sun...   Aug 30 03, 06:52
- - Cleo_Serapis   Nicely done Brahms!  :sun: Look forward to ...   Aug 30 03, 07:39
- - Morgan le Fay   A small collection: Soft air, clear night skies K...   Aug 31 03, 22:09
- - Brahms   Very fine, Morgan, besides the 5-7-5 balance they ...   Aug 31 03, 22:30
- - Brahms   Pasture Waiting Water cascading thin stream into ...   Aug 31 03, 22:52
- - JustDaniel   Summer Leaves for Fall sunned limbs twist inward,...   Sep 1 03, 07:28
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Brahms @ Aug. 31 2003, 23:30)Very fine...   Sep 1 03, 08:56
- - JustDaniel   Hey, LorII! Try ignoring THIS one! ...   Sep 11 03, 05:26
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Sep. 11 2003, 06:26)Hey,...   Sep 11 03, 05:29
- - Brahms   Low clouds scuttling gentle dark and white these T...   Sep 11 03, 12:27
- - Jox   Hi, One can also have a haiku cycle where there a...   Sep 11 03, 16:52
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Jox @ Sep. 11 2003, 17:52)Hi, One can...   Sep 11 03, 18:20
- -   Dear Jox What'a all this about "I don't d...   Sep 26 03, 01:50
- - Jox   Cleo and Alan, Thank you very much indeed. I real...   Sep 26 03, 13:39
- - Cybele   Good Morning to all Since this is my first visit...   Oct 20 03, 03:24
- - Cybele   Hello Daniel, Summer Leaves for Fall QUOTE sunne...   Oct 20 03, 03:30
- - Jox   Grace; most kind of you (as always!). Thank yo...   Oct 20 03, 04:08
- - Cleo_Serapis   This is coming along nicely!  :) Although I...   Oct 20 03, 07:15
- - Jox   Hi, Brahams is arguing (see his crit of my Hikau ...   Oct 20 03, 08:02
- -   Haiku - THE RINGER (A Tragedy In 17 Syllables) T...   Oct 26 03, 09:33
- - JustDaniel   Here's one to break many of the 'rules...   Oct 26 03, 16:25
- - Michelle   This is my first haiku.  A very knowledgeable poet...   Oct 26 03, 20:27
- - JustDaniel   Bushed Fox? vixen’s hoary tail camouflaged nothin...   Oct 27 03, 00:11
- -   The (Dahl-iesque) F R G Take nothing from frog a...   Oct 27 03, 02:26
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Alan @ Oct. 27 2003, 01:26)The (Dahl-i...   Oct 27 03, 06:09
- - Michelle   Tadpole grows strong legs Surmounts pond, embarks ...   Oct 27 03, 19:30
- - JustDaniel   how about silly senryu? Whether one hump or two i...   Oct 28 03, 00:12
- - Cybele   First attempts at Haiku from petrol droplets sw...   Oct 28 03, 01:06
- -   Dear Grace I prefer my haiku to be precisely 5-7-...   Oct 28 03, 02:26
- - Cybele   Good Sir Knight Thank you for your kind comment...   Oct 28 03, 02:38
- - Cybele   Dear Alan QUOTE Haiku - THE RINGER (A Tragedy In...   Oct 28 03, 02:50
- - Cybele   Hi Michelle I just love how Haiku can say so muc...   Oct 28 03, 02:58
- - Michelle   Grace,  it's hard to believe this is your firs...   Oct 28 03, 03:13
- -   To the 12 minute double haiku-ist, aka Grace ...   Oct 28 03, 03:29
- - Jox   Hello, excellent haikus everyone... good show. Ta...   Oct 28 03, 03:34
- - JustDaniel   Thanks for the info, Jax.  I for one never underst...   Oct 28 03, 07:25
- - Cybele   Hi Daniel, Thank you for your comments After r...   Oct 28 03, 09:13
- - Cleo_Serapis   Just so no one gets confused, this tile is for the...   Oct 28 03, 09:44
- -   Dear Cleo Ha, I have a problem : My haiku, while ...   Oct 28 03, 10:17
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Alan @ Oct. 28 2003, 10:17)Dear Cleo ...   Oct 28 03, 10:42
- - Cybele   Having started writing Haiku, I now can't stop...   Oct 28 03, 11:20
- -   Dear Grace "I now can't stop... help!...   Oct 28 03, 11:59
- - Michelle   James,  thank you for the information.  I had no i...   Oct 28 03, 12:37
- - Cybele   Hello Michelle, Such a wonderful mind picture.  I...   Oct 28 03, 13:04
- - Cybele   Hello Alan Thank you.  I never could disti...   Oct 28 03, 13:10
- -   Dear Grace "I never could distinguish between shi...   Oct 28 03, 17:47
- - Brahms   New pasture bride-way 600 foot mud puppies from we...   Oct 28 03, 16:14
- -   Dear Brahms Not being in the least a country boy,...   Oct 28 03, 17:53
- - Cleo_Serapis   Merging into HAIKU thread..... Nicely done!   Oct 28 03, 18:14
- - JustDaniel   Hey, Grace, you're a natural!  Sorry I...   Oct 29 03, 08:04
- -   WASTE, OR WAIST ? Hallowe'en's over: Tric...   Nov 2 03, 14:02
- - JustDaniel   fall of dignity trees refuse to leave; they’ll ca...   Nov 3 03, 03:39
- - JustDaniel   fall beclouds shadowing daylight, then reigning o...   Nov 6 03, 15:15
- - Cybele   December roses brave the kiss of falling snow with...   Nov 8 03, 00:27
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 23:27)December ...   Nov 8 03, 09:32
- - Cleo_Serapis   Nice reading in here!   OK - I'll try one! Whis...   Nov 9 03, 08:41
- - Cybele   QUOTE Whispers of the wind waltz in perfect unison...   Nov 9 03, 09:26
- - JustDaniel   sign: Custard's Last Stand ice cream drive-in ...   Nov 10 03, 01:48
- - JustDaniel   mirrors wakened, squinting eyes’ vengeful mourni...   Nov 12 03, 02:25
- - Cybele   unmourned,  with throats cut on the fresh-m...   Nov 30 03, 08:48
- - JustDaniel   How un-Graceful, Cybele!   poetic just is s...   Nov 30 03, 13:00
- - Cybele   Hi Daniel, Sorry, I just always feel so sorry for...   Nov 30 03, 13:36
- - Cybele   on the log cabin ice crystals hanging from eaves ...   Dec 1 03, 08:29
- - JustDaniel   jack’s flap house crystal in jack’s Log Cabin cry...   Dec 1 03, 14:00
- - Cybele   my head tilted back to catch  raindrops on my chee...   Dec 6 03, 03:41
- - JustDaniel   Hi, Grace!  Lovely, indeed! When you post...   Dec 18 03, 18:10
- - Cybele   Good Morning Daniel, How lovely to hear from you...   Dec 19 03, 01:17
- -   Dear Grace Quite lovely ! Lets see if I can ...   Dec 19 03, 02:34
- - Cybele   Good Morning Alan, Great response!   WHIM...   Dec 19 03, 03:13
- - Jox   Hi Grace, unmourned,  with throats cut on the fr...   Dec 19 03, 03:42
- - JustDaniel   Agreeing with James' assessment... we now mov...   Dec 26 03, 12:19
- - Cybele   still wrapped in your love tears dry on my cheeks,...   Jan 11 04, 05:06
- -   Dear Grace Loved the haiku, and can respond with ...   Jan 11 04, 05:32
- - Cybele   Good Sir Knight Thank you for your empathy and ...   Jan 11 04, 06:08
- - Cybele   albino badger viewed in a floodlit garden; crunche...   Jan 14 04, 03:40
- - JustDaniel   if you'll pardon an askew senryu... painting ...   Jan 16 04, 21:34
- - Cybele   Good Morning Daniel, A very vivid picture indeed....   Jan 17 04, 02:26
- - Cleo_Serapis   Warm sun glistens frost on a brisk morning of hope...   Jan 17 04, 08:56
- - JustDaniel   Interactive Haiku, anyone? Millie the farm horse ...   Jan 18 04, 04:45
- -   Dear Daniel can you feel the air? it’s glistering...   Jan 18 04, 04:54
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Alan @ Jan. 18 2004, 03:54)Dear Daniel...   Jan 18 04, 07:24
- -   Dear Daniel You had me LOLling about "! A wha...   Jan 18 04, 07:32
- - Cybele   Dear Daniel, Not to spoil your initiative. Just...   Jan 18 04, 07:45
- - Cleo_Serapis   OOOhhhhhhhh   This looks fun!   Ok: in the hu...   Jan 18 04, 08:54
- - JustDaniel   Pineys: Thanks fer coat! collar always in yer ...   Jan 18 04, 17:18
- - Cybele   Hi Daniel, Still not able to think of witty follo...   Jan 19 04, 03:02
- - JustDaniel   Well!!!  I never!  Moon us, w...   Jan 21 04, 07:13
- - Cybele   onslaught of winter sprinkle of fine dandruff; the...   Jan 22 04, 03:06
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Jan. 22 2004, 02:06) onslaugh...   Jan 22 04, 04:51
- - Dove   The sweetness of full, orange nectarines turns pur...   Jan 24 04, 18:01
- - JustDaniel   Con sensual Lust posing as love turning a world i...   Jan 27 04, 09:01
- - Cybele   winter stars glitter. . sailor blows warmth in cu...   Jan 28 04, 03:45
- - Dove   Purple violets are warmed by children's laught...   Jan 28 04, 15:04
- - Cleo_Serapis   Flakes fall ubiased sprinkling kisses of cool love...   Jan 28 04, 20:38
- - Cybele   Good Morning Dove and Cleo, Two lovely pieces, ...   Jan 29 04, 01:42
- - Athena   Delightful, Grace! Won't you come and tr...   Jan 29 04, 02:05
- - Cybele   Hello Dolly, Thank you for your kind words. ...   Jan 30 04, 02:07
- - Cybele   the snow covered roof of the garden bird table; ro...   Jan 30 04, 03:35
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