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post Nov 15 10, 07:01
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SO IN LOVE

We cherish romance, we joyfully dance;
tonight we'll tempt a passionate stance
as starlit ribbons reflect a lovers trance;
we joyfully dance, we cherish romance.

Desires are burning, soaring to extremes,
a stardust afterglow spirits our dreams,
sweet, precious charms spell a yearning
soaring to extremes, desires are burning.

Your candied red lips I fervently pursue.
I'm captivated, bewildered, have no clue;
a bit dazed, I can't muster catchy quips,
I fervently pursue your candied red lips.

Paradise is your embrace, heavenly serene,
you loving me, there's never any in between,
no faux ecstasies, no foolish, futile chase;
heavenly serene, paradise is your embrace.

Temptation thrives in a rapturous tone,
dulcet voices echo in an amorous zone,
as caressive emotions indulge our lives;
in a rapturous tone, temptation thrives.

I'm so in love with you, what can I do?
My body is shaky, my senses are askew...
beguiled by your tempting eyes of blue,
what can I do, I am so in love with you.


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post Nov 15 10, 09:50
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