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 Mar 4 07, 00:54
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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 322 Joined: 20-August 06 From: Minneapolis, Minnesota Member No.: 217 Real Name: Timothy Blighton Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:justdaniel  |
Hey there Sylvia,
A belated congrats on your award!! You've worked (and reworked) this poem quite a bit. ~tim ·······  ······· |
  
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Mar 4 07, 11:06
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 Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 1,547 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Jeddah, Saudi Arabia Member No.: 13 Real Name: Daniah Writer of: Poetry |
Hey Sylvia,
Congrats on the award. Really a deserving piece. I like the revisions. Captivating from each line to the next. Great read. Hugs Dani ······· ·······Happiness is a journey, not a destination.
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Mar 7 07, 13:58
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 8,865 Joined: 27-August 04 From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia Member No.: 78 Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:David Ting |
Hi Dani & Tim!
Thanks so much for your congrats! Altho' I did work a lot on this poem, personally I'm not particularly fond of it....  Still, with a little help from my friends, it's acceptably presentable  Cheers! Syl *** 
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Mar 8 07, 01:15
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,822 Joined: 3-August 03 From: Florida Member No.: 10 Real Name: Elizabeth Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori Kanter |
Congrats Sylvia ...
This is nearing it's high potential. You've done wonders shaping it and making it stand strong in our poetic minds... Good Luck with it, and big hugs... Liz ······· ·······Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here!
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