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> Unhurried, an in-carnation rictameter with a wink
JustDaniel
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Unhurried

hurried
in-car-Nation
may find transportation
to Bethlehem’s stable-setting
hard to fathom over seas in tumult
but God, in His time has reached out;
Immanuel’s declined
incarnation
hurried

He was
under, standing
behind, surrounding me
when I was still oblivious
long before He showed Himself in my heart;
through many years he’d carried me
when I had not known how
understanding
He was


© Daniel J Ricketts 19 Dec 2003


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