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Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews _ ARCHIVES -> Poetry for Crit Prior to 2011 _ The Problem Is…

Posted by: Arnfinn Aug 7 09, 05:03

The Problem Is…

The problem is... the problem is…

The problem is... that my damn problem won't go away.

The problem is... the problem is real. The problem is with me morning and night.

The problem is...

The problem is...

The problem is...

What was I thinking?

Dunno…

Hmm… The problem is… the problem is…

What was I thinking?

The problem is… Geeez, I do have a big problem.

What’s the problem?

Dunno…

Geeez I feel good.

I’ve got no problems.

John

Posted by: Psyche Aug 7 09, 14:48

Geez, Arnie, I'm envious!

Posted by: ohsteve Aug 7 09, 20:10

John, Problem? What problem... they say I used to have a drinking problem, but I would drink, fall down, go to sleep...no problem....lol.
Memory is a terrible thing to lose John, I am glad you can make light of it.
Take care mate
Steve

PS You know the difference tween a drunk and an alcoholic don'cha?
A drunk don't gotta go to those damned meetin's.

Posted by: Psyche Aug 7 09, 23:17

Well put, Steve.

Ya gotta pay attention to friend Steve, mate. Or not? Good joke, too.

Hugs, Syl***

Posted by: Arnfinn Aug 8 09, 02:00

Yeah, Sylv,

I know the reason why.

Well, it is better to write a poem like this while I can tap keys and sorta understand what the hell I'm writing.

Thanks,

Christine.

John

Posted by: Arnfinn Aug 8 09, 02:15

Mate, hope things are a bit better for ya.

Mate, alcohol, is one of the best known preservatives known to man.
Mate, home brew has no chemical preservatives.
No hangovers!
Few months ago I had CAT scan on the noggin. Yep! they found me brain. Said, it was nomal for my age.
Don't just brew for myself, I also give itaway to my friends.

How did I remember all that!

Hmmm...What was I going tooooooooooooooooooooo Say.

Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuunno.

Regards,

John

Posted by: Arnfinn Aug 8 09, 02:17

Read ya loud and clear, Christine.

John

Posted by: ace Aug 10 09, 17:04

John:

Makes an excellent visual poem and ther delays and pauses make it realitistic. In fact I have no problem with any of the lines. Well done,

ace

Posted by: Thoth Aug 12 09, 08:44

Of all the things I've lost - - -

I miss my memory the most!

Good one John, close to home on that Mate!

Wally