 Squeaky Snow, Odin 19 - hold over for Odin 21 |
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| Guest_ohsteve_* |
  Oct 29 10, 12:57
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Squeaky Snow
Squeal, squeak...every time I put my foot down on the new fallen snow, a noise would arise. It was a squeaky snow, sounds like a mouse who just bumped into a cat... oops! Squeak! Hard to sneak up on someone or something when every move your feet make, gives away your location with that scrunching squeak. I was hoping to approach a doe and her newborn fawn to get some pictures of them in the light falling snow, but nope...squeak, squeak, squeak, that perked up their ears, off they bound and all I got was a tail end shot. Darned squeaky snow, ... squeak... hmmm what was that? I looked around the corner and there were my siblings trying to sneak up on me with snowballs. I guess squeaky snow has its uses. Steve |
  
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Oct 29 10, 13:49
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Hi Steve,
 Odin 19 is slated for only prose entries. Can you edit this one to prose please? Thx ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
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| Guest_ohsteve_* |
Oct 29 10, 18:44
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Sorry Lori, Is this better now? My mind was thinking on other things.
Steve |
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