WELCOME TO MM Styrmwolf! I believe you might just be 'Whitney', my neighbor in Maine? If so, so glad you could join us!
I just popped over to your website, and enjoyed my brief visit. Phantom, eh? We just bought a new HD/DVD player and one of the first dvd's we bought - you guessed it! I'm curious to learn, what does this forum look like to you (*if you are using a Mac OS)? Can you see the skin selections (lower left side of screen)?
There's plenty to read and comment on here as you get acclimated to our 'tiles'. I've been writing for 4 years now (mainly poetry) and have learned much from online writing forums. It gave me my start!
Critique should be fun and should help the writer (not harm) and I hope you'll find that it is fun, friendly and helpful here.
Would you mind if I posted your state/country in your profile?
As we always say here, if you are seeking honest feedback, then you'll find it here. Always remember though, your works are your own and our suggestions are yours to take or toss.
If you have any questions, please ask.
Cheers
~Cleo