Naughty Loan **, response Sonnet to Larry's "Not Alone" Options

[JustDaniel]

... a specific response to Larry's fine sonnet, Not Alone in Hermes


Naughty Loan

I too am so impressed to read your work;
It seems that I've neglected reading here.
So here I am and trouncing like a jerk,
I leave the path and venture without fear

of stepping on your feet or on some home
of insects, vermin, birds or who knows what
to wander off where'er my eyes may roam
and run or play or simply rest my butt.

A cautious step is something that I've not
been taught, perhaps is now too late to learn.
If I go on like this, will I be caught
and sent away to somewhere I will burn

forever for my lacking social skills
and racking up so many hidden kills?

© MLeeDickensson 23 June 2017

in response to Larry D. Jennings' Not Alone