Hello & Welcome Karen,
You never gave us an introduction or told us about the level of critique you prefer so I'll be as gentle as possible with "Gone...".
You started with IP and then lost a foot or added a foot here and there throughout your poem. I love the picture you have painted in my mind but I stumble on the line variables. Your enjambment is beautifully done though.
QUOTE
September dawn has lit my lemon tree
and tinted fruit in mystic, ruby shades.
Small clusters hang like silent bells against
the window pane. A citrus scent cascades
(perfection)
around each waxy leaf, then lifts to comb
worn eaves where empty nests are wedged. (short 1 foot)
My cat is pacing underneath the sill;
moist lilies and geraniums have edged
(Perhaps add "last years" between "where" and "empty")
beyond the mossy walk and wall. My sheers
are parted as I watch one saffron beam
appear through thorny boughs. Now morning warms
the lawn in increments of light and every seam (over 1 foot)
(Perhaps - "the lawn in increments of light. Each seam")
of day is filled with glints of you— aloof
in subtle turns and hues of cloud. Reserved
inside the twisted petal of a rose. Your hand (over 1 foot)
holds all elusive beauty I've observed.
(Perhaps - "inside soft petals of a rose. Your hand")
As with any suggestions or critiques on this site, they are yours to take or toss as you will. Whether you decide to tweak your poem here and there is always up to you. Thank you for sharing a lovely thought.
Larry