I would like to wake up in the ocean Options

[Guest_dflore_*]

I'd sprinkle wishes and dreams
from the night before in the water
and wonder if they'd ever wash in as reality
where is the tide that can carry me out to sea
without ever having to say goodbye to anyone?
where silence is king
my eyes have been staring too long at what is not clear
actually this poem isn't true
I'd just like to be a wave
climbing up your thigh

[saore]

I like the clarity of this poem, and the way you end it dflore. I like the emotion this line shows:

where is the tide that can carry me out to sea
without ever having to say goodbye to anyone?

great job here!

Sergio

[Guest_iverhyck_*]

Oh! How beautifully you wrote about your dreams which are so unusual (perhaps it's because I've never dreamt this way).
Konstantin.