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MONTH'S MUSINGS, Silver ~ Odin 14 |
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Jan 17 09, 15:52
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Ornate Oracle
Group: Praetorian
Posts: 9,313
Joined: 27-August 04
From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia
Member No.: 78
Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
Referred By:David Ting
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Month’s Musings ..........I
Gargantuan waves pound pitching ship. We round Cape Horn ahead of summer dawn, decks creaking violently in dimness of a stealthy moon.
The gale hurtles clouds towards a horizon fisted by fierce waves. We peer from homespun balaclavas at implausible ocean swells.
Daybreak rumbles out of steel skies: - Look Mummy! There’s the Albatross, like in The Ancient Mariner! I’d never harm an albatross…
Enrico ‘C’ thrusts through appalling seas, skirts Isle of Estados, veers towards Malvinas as eager gulls grasp spoils in her wake. Docked in Puerto Argentino, false legends ride reality’s wharf.
A shipshape town where slate-roofed cottages confine startling blossoms in glassed porches. Man-made marvel on this farthermost archipelago wearied by remorseless fangs of the Atlantic. Girls dream of Latin men, tango, city lights, of fleeing from their crucified existences nailed to the history of these peaty isles.
Unsheltered universe tousles skimpy vegetation; I still harbour treeless finitude in my eyes and midsummer chill under my skin. Peat bonfires branded my soul with sorrow.
You and I board ship heading towards unruffled northern waters, join in games, parties, homecoming…
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Your merriment peals in my mind’s abject niches this Summer solstice; an undertow of gaiety in loss. I gaze out my window at unresponsive Buenos Aires skyline. Down below, rushing roads know no contrition.
Far-flung idylls are icy prongs impaling my bones, re-birthed in the empty enormity of time.
Focused on faces furrowed by labour, callous sunlight shrouds sidewalks. I learn there are many roads to God, some etched on desolate design.
By Psyche
Note: I have not italized Spanish proper names, since these are correct in our Southern Hemisphere (In the same way that one would not translate 'Porto Alegre' to 'Happy Port', to give an example of a Brazilian port).
Copyright: Sylvia Maclagan, Buenos Aires, Argentina, 13-01-2009.
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Mis temas favoritos The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.
"There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction."
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Jan 17 09, 18:33
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Mosaic Master
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From: Massachusetts
Member No.: 2
Real Name: Lori Kanter
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
Referred By:Imhotep
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Thank you for your entry into Odin's Opposition!
Perhaps you'll rise up, drink from the Well of Wisdom and be crowned the 'bringer of victory'?
Best of luck in the battle!
~Mosaic Musings Staff
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Sep 10 09, 19:17
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Mosaic Master
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Real Name: Lori Kanter
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Congratulations Sylvia on your Silver placement!
You have risen up, drank from the Well of Wisdom and have been crowned the ‘bringer of victory’!
Well done!
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner
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Sep 11 09, 19:20
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Sylvia, Very well done in placing second and third, I will just give my congrats here but please consider them given for both pieces.
Steve
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