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May 14 19, 15:26
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If relenting for cause, I would say you were prone to do that anyway for the logical mind will not leave ones’ behind hanging out and for all, on display.
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May 27 19, 06:31
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Hanging out here, there's none to display what you write for, and hardly to play. I've been not feeling well; my bod's going to hell. I've been off-line for many a day.
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May 30 19, 22:27
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Many days you have not been on-line and the cause is, you’re not feeling fine. Is it due to your knees or your feet? Be at ease with your lap-top in bed while supine.
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Jun 1 19, 08:03
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Yes, my laptop, but I'm not in bed; I have used my recliner instead. Oft the pain in my shin tempts my mouth to great sin, but depression's what plays with my head.
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Jun 4 19, 14:17
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If depression’s what plays in your head and you feel you’d be better of dead think of how you’ve been blessed more than most of the rest and then put on a big smile instead.
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Jun 7 19, 10:41
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If I put a big smile on my steed it's because I was dreaming, and peed while the dreamt horse looked on and it drizzled till gone from my vessel, and pressure was freed.
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Jun 10 19, 22:55
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If that pressure in vessels was freed then of medicine, there is no need so the cuff for your arm can be worn like a charm and the doctors will not intercede.
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Jun 28 19, 05:57
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If my butt's hanging out on display it is not from my kneeling to pray. I can't get on my knees 'cause of pain and un-ease but I do pray. What more can I say?
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Jul 12 19, 21:54
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I can say that I pray but what’s more there are times when I want to explore penitence on my feet so when prayers are complete I don’t have to get off of the floor.
Daniel, I've been on vacation for a while but I'm back now.
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Jul 28 19, 15:58
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My inaction's had me on the floor but I'm on a new path to explore. Though it's three months away gastric sleeve should one day make me lighter than air in my core.
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Aug 7 19, 22:15
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If your core makes you lighter than air what’s in store is a life without care where you float in the breeze but look out for that sneeze or some flatulence; you just don’t dare.
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Aug 19 19, 13:41
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Well, in truth I would not be that light; my exagerous words were a slight bit o' stretchin' the truth, but alas and forsooth I've well-started the weight-losing fight!
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Aug 20 19, 12:44
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If you’ve started your weight losing bout to be skinny, not overly stout here’s a rule you might use which you’ll never abuse: if the food’s tasting good, spit it out.
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Aug 20 19, 20:42
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If you spit out the food that tastes good they will think you are nasty and rude; it is better to taste lightly; swallow, don't waste. Then it's "knife to your throat!" understood?
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Aug 24 19, 22:38
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Understanding a “knife to your throat” means you may have got on the wrong boat for your Bermuda cruise so politely excuse and go find a life raft that will float.
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Aug 30 19, 12:17
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There's no need for a life raft to place that old knife to the throat. It's the grace of just ceasing to eat so that you won't repeat all the weight-gain with all its disgrace.
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Sep 2 19, 15:10
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All that weight gain with all the disgrace is societal norm, commonplace; but each person’s unique and not seen as a freak; your disdain is like slapping their face.
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Sep 2 19, 17:39
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No disdain but for me in this case so they'll not have me slapping their face; it is I who am fat and much like old Jack Sprat I've no plans to engorge after grace.
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Sep 12 19, 10:36
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I’ve no plans to engorge after grace but I still shove some food in my face for my wife’s a great cook and I know what it took so I’ll eat what she puts in my place.
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Sep 12 19, 16:26
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I too eat what my wife gives to me but it's much less, and we both agree that if I'm to lose weight then my hunger must wait for the next meal, and that's by decree.
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