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Mar 2 18, 06:38
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CLIMB GRASS
climbing lessened after I hit green area; my bare feet lapped up the cool grass bladelets
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Mar 5 18, 15:15
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by the shore
blade lets you gut your fish then you filet it to have dinner, after you batter each one
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Apr 28 18, 10:25
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EARTH EDEMA
each one added some wood removing dirt from the top pouring water to make room… HA HA!
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Apr 29 18, 22:24
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Hit It Again
Ha! Ha? It’s not going to match criteria. It’s one syllable short and I think twain.
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May 27 18, 11:54
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MARK'S NOTES
Mark Twain always wrote to real situations that keep us thinking lest we become senseless
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May 28 18, 10:01
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savor steak
senseless aging good meat very long for its age, obscuring the fine aroma, robs snack
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May 29 18, 18:57
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rune snack: writer eating his not-so-magic words because he lost the beat in his last line
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May 30 18, 19:06
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limit error
last line is too long for many but southerner is enunciating it so they hear
I fixed it Daniel!
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May 31 18, 01:06
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THERE HEARD
Their cough hasn't a large 'earing since it's in a roadside cockney ale house that's for English
Okay, I excised "breed" from the end, so that it wouldn't breed contempt for my ability.
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May 31 18, 22:44
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elk is hound
English like the breeds who keep their sheep safe and you include the best in your Cinquain. Safe! Sound!
“English breed” is a good hound but it is also three syllables!
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Jun 1 18, 14:36
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safe sound is when the ump spreads both of his arms out but prevents his mouth from saying a word
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Jun 3 18, 13:26
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a word, as they once said, was given to the wise but it may have fallen upon deaf ears
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Jun 3 18, 14:08
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deaf ears can't hear wisdom; it passes right through them without communication to their brain
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Jun 5 18, 08:41
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that’s not it
their brain has a lot to analyze or forget and resembles soft spaghetti; skills left
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Jun 6 18, 13:59
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SOFTY SELLS
skillets open up the food preparer's barrel to kindly prepare each morsel you'd kiss
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Jun 7 18, 13:18
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kind o’ sweet
kisses in the church pew necessitate that some discover what happened and be overt
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Jun 7 18, 15:36
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OKAY'D TASTE
overt kisses kinda ask for no instructions; you unwrap and suck them without debate
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Jun 8 18, 13:26
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demos erase
debate echoed chamber making their agenda opposing those republicans; spared none
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Jun 8 18, 14:05
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SABRE NOTCH
spared nun a huge jabbo by laying myself out recklessly to avoid panic "ENOUGH!"
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Jun 9 18, 20:16
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every house
enough venting will do extremely well when you rely on air conditioners you’ll use
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