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Larry
Posted on: Nov 13 19, 14:44


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much
is said
about life
but some folks care
less
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Posted on: Nov 13 19, 14:44


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And in reply to your post to your friend:

If you’re nibbling on hot egg-fu-yung
then it’s possible you are among
China town’s restauranteurs
where the food connoisseurs
never scream when they’re burning their tongue.
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Little turds will just drop on your head
if you walk through the forest instead
of a nice city street
without trees. Life’s complete
if you’re strolling without all the dread.
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Larry
Posted on: Nov 13 19, 14:42


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a winter time warp
is what all dyslexics wear;
they don’t like the clod
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Larry
Posted on: Nov 13 19, 14:41


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udderly confused
as to which one contains milk;
calves are on all fours
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Larry
Posted on: Nov 13 19, 14:40


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collect from your roof
all of the branches and leaves
so you can snow-proof
every gutter and the eaves
from what a long winter heaves
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Posted on: Nov 13 19, 14:39


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QUOTE
UPWARDS


Using Prevailing Winds Assists Really Dumb Sailors

ASSISTS
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Posted on: Nov 13 19, 14:39


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QUOTE
NIGHTY


Nice Ingredients Give Husband Tasty Yields

YIELDS
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Posted on: Nov 13 19, 14:38


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QUOTE
RARER


Really Awkward Rebuttals Evade Reason

EVADE
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Larry
Posted on: Nov 13 19, 14:37


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For a woman, the word-play’s not bad
and I won’t be a chauvinist cad
that critiques every post
to see who has the most
interesting new thought they might add.
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Larry
Posted on: Oct 11 19, 14:42


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I had better not cough, it will be
a disaster you don’t want to see
for my elbow won’t reach
what I use for good speech;
I’m surprised at what comes out of me.
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due
and now
payable
are what makes you
oh!
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Spring’s white out,
green buds never had a chance;
no leaves to rake up
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Posted on: Oct 11 19, 14:40


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it comes out curdled
when Miss Muffet milks her cows;
she screams whey too much
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Feud emerged screaming
from the peace which used to reign;
guns and knives gleaming
and both sides must be insane
for such hatred you can’t feign
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Posted on: Oct 11 19, 14:39


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QUOTE
SAVOR


Sexual Awareness Vanquishes Older Retirees

AWARE
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Posted on: Oct 11 19, 14:38


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TAGGED


To Attract Girls Get Expensive Diamonds

ENGAGE
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CREASED


Couldn’t Really Educe Any Sensible Explanation Daniel

COULDN’T
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Larry
Posted on: Sep 19 19, 13:17


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Hi Daniel,

Not sure about your problem with enjambments and the only way I might be able to alleviate that is to use the French version of 8 and 6 instead of the 3 quatrains and couplet. I wish you would clarify your statement about the inversion in the final couplet. The first line is a continuation of the sentence in the prior line and the last line is my summation or viewpoint of the way things are as I see them.

Thanks for chiming in and let me know a bit more of your thoughts.

Larry
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Larry
Posted on: Sep 19 19, 13:12


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For the next meal and that’s by decree
you should eat everything that you see
has been placed on your plate;
such as that is your fate
and the pounds will drop off one… two… three.
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Larry
Posted on: Sep 19 19, 13:11


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now
we know
the causes
we should have learned
then
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Posted on: Sep 19 19, 13:11


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with illegal hides
Indians built strong teepees;
some were tanned, some rot
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Posted on: Sep 19 19, 13:10


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emerge from your crouch
after doing a leg thrust;
it’s been way too long
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Posted on: Sep 19 19, 13:09


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their line finds a trace
of reasoning for the feud
but one must save face
without kin being too crude
so both families are screwed
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Posted on: Sep 19 19, 13:08


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QUOTE
UNCLE


Usual Nepotism Cancels Legislative Excellence

USUAL
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