Quite a dream you have here, Aggie...
and yet expressing engagingly the lengths we go to discover what we already could have right here with less investment!
Let me offer a bit of assistance with your
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A Lunar Welcome
We flew to Moon to catch a glimpse of Earth
[ actually, quite a profound statement ! ]
from space[;] (,) our engines droned an endless tune;
awoke the final border , plagued a dearth
[ I think we need some help in understanding the above line ? ]
on stars as Sparrow Eight, sped to the moon.
Too late, some crash speeding meteorites appeared.
Our jet swirled craft swerved just in time[,] ; avoided bad or we'd have crashed,
but landing safe ed on Moon[,] (.) though dazed, we all cheered.
When soon some creatures came[,] (.) we dared not dash.
These Moonies stood around us [--] (,) friendly lot [--]
with welcome smiles. They kissed our cheeks and hands.
We hugged them back, touched by the peace they brought, welcome so hot.
Their warmth amazed these folk beings from other lands.
If Would earthlings treat each other quite so well,
our world would be a safer place to dwell.
Now if that helps a little, Ag, it's swell
to keep or toss whate'er you like. All's well!
Lightly, Daniel