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 Nov 6 03, 17:11
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Dear Grace and Michelle
Both brilliant ! REQUEST STOP Request stop this damn bus where I want to get off not odd place approximately nowhere Love Alan |
  
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Nov 6 03, 23:01
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QUOTE (Alan @ Nov. 06 2003, 15:11) REQUEST STOP Request stop this damn bus where I want to get off not odd place approximately nowhere Scattered Nowhere, to anywhere from yesterday and then becoming today's present thought; where now? |
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Nov 6 03, 23:35
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Dove @ Nov. 06 2003, 22:01) Scattered Nowhere, to anywhere from yesterday and then becoming today's present thought; where now? Fill a sofa; call ya, Jessica! *smile* Auntie Yup
Where now you are you’ll stand. I see: you’ve posted yours, and ante’s ceded; wanna bet? ‘tsa deal! © Daniel J Ricketts 06 Nov 2003 ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Nov 6 03, 23:55
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Just Daniel
how many syllables are in 'tsa? i'm not sure how to count it. |
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Nov 7 03, 01:05
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Good Morning everyone.
 Great brain food this  Tsa deal The cards of life I’ll take my six face down Don’t want no crystal ball to see my future Grace 
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Grace  http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner        |
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Nov 7 03, 01:34
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QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 06 2003, 23:05) Good Morning everyone. Great brain food this Tsa deal The cards of life I’ll take my six face down Don’t want no crystal ball to see my future Grace cybele, thank you for saving me from that horrible line! lol Pick-pocket a Future My future lies in your hand. Trace my love lines and worth; empty my pockets to predict your wealth. |
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Nov 7 03, 01:56
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
My pleasure Dove
 This is great fun!! Your wealth
Can never cure A child’s tears, a child’s fears Only unconditional love Does that ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Nov 7 03, 02:02
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hello Michelle,
 Thank you for the comment. They surely are ... very addictive. Seems to have become my morning wake-up exercise. Love Grace
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Nov 7 03, 02:56
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THE PROBOSCIS CANNOT LIE, BUT IT CAN GROW .....
Does that nose which he has, protruding, from his face, expose his ethnic origins ? That does ..... Love Alan |
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Nov 7 03, 03:19
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Good Morning Sir Knight
 Nice one Alan, I like it! :laugh: A little poetic license required I feel That doe’s bright, liquid eyes express it’s gentle soul could you sight along a rifle and fire? Love Grace
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Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Nov 7 03, 06:11
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Dove @ Nov. 06 2003, 22:55) Just Daniel how many syllables are in 'tsa? i'm not sure how to count it. Just one! How many syllables are in the line: "my future" ?  To count
upon fingers in this digital age need have no rhyme nor reason for cinquains. © Daniel J Ricketts 07 Nov 2003 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Nov 7 03, 06:25
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 02:19) Good Morning Sir Knight Nice one Alan, I like it!  A little poetic license required I feel That doe’s bright, liquid eyes express it’s gentle soul could you sight along a rifle and fire? Love Grace Sat ‘ere in Ambush!
Anne’d fire! Without a blink she’d shoot that faun, I think. She doesn’t like satyrical. Do you? © Daniel J Ricketts 07 Nov 2003 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Nov 7 03, 06:45
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 06 2003, 09:08) Aah! Now you're talking. MY HERO (Shakespeare that is.)  Dashed off straight from the quill to the parchment, ink-flecked. Will’s impatient, teeming brain flying Love Grace I couln't pass up your great tribute, Grace! [Missing syllable in L4?] Here's Myan: Shakespene To Will upon a quill I’mb quite indebtedly penned amateur with cagey words unloosed. © Daniel J Ricketts 07 Nov 2003 Lightly, Daniel
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Nov 7 03, 06:48
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hey Dan the Man
QUOTE How many syllables in 'my future' er, three?  (please don't give me a detention, I want to go out tonight) Tsa deal The cards of life I’ll take my six face down Don’t want no crystal ball to see future Tatty bye Grace 
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Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Nov 7 03, 07:01
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 05:48) [b]Hey Dan the Man QUOTE How many syllables in 'my future' er, three? (please don't give me a detention, I want to go out tonight) Tsa deal The cards of life I’ll take my six face down Don’t want no crystal ball to see future Tatty bye Grace Detention? De tension is rising?  Feud? Sure! Do you want one? Be careful not to lunge; few’d even notice if we’d spat mew cuss © Daniel J Ricketts 07 Nov 2003 Lightly, Daniel
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Nov 7 03, 07:35
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Feud? Sure! VERY NIFTY Daniel
Mew!! Cuss that dratted cat! Two shoes and a slipper Running out of ammunition Air gun! Grace :sun: :speechless: ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Nov 7 03, 08:09
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 06:35) Feud? Sure! VERY NIFTY Daniel Mew!! Cuss that dratted cat! Two shoes and a slipper Running out of ammunition Air gun! Grace Do tell, Grace! This is fun, isn't it? Care for an apple? Take a byte of this: Ere gun he’d let it fly; son didn’t live to tell (How many Tells do you know now?) he missed! © Daniel J Ricketts 07 Nov 2003 sLightly off the mark, Daniel
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Nov 7 03, 08:16
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Dear Grace
"Mew!! Cuss that dratted cat! Two shoes and a slipper Running out of ammunition Air gun!" had me LOL, which is just what I need less than 1/2 an hour after having 2 tes, count them, 2 ! front bottom teeth out. I needed it, cuz I need to learn to laugh in a different way LOL ! Love Alan PS I LIKE cats ..... PPS added 3 mins later - see, I can't even typo correctly wissou my fron tes ! |
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Nov 7 03, 08:22
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Ecthsthract from a dental epic-sode
He mithed hith two fron tees after the ec-stracthion and had to thpeak peculiar Englith .... Love Alan |
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Nov 7 03, 08:48
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Alan @ Nov. 07 2003, 07:22) Ecthsthract from a dental epic-sode He mithed hith two fron tees after the ec-stracthion and had to thpeak peculiar Englith .... Love Alan Hey, Alan! Rack 'em up! Woud you bet your eye teeth on a game o' nein ball? ein glitch unless sprechen quite pe-cu-li-ar-ly. Pea-cue’ll yearly snooker your side pockets. Lightly breakin'... your... Daniel
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