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Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews _ ARCHIVES -> Short Form Poetry -> Shogun's Psalms _ Prunus Domestica

Posted by: Arnfinn Mar 10 09, 04:35

Prunus Domestica

The tree's plum blossom
falls as pink snow to the grass
delicate carpet.

John

Posted by: Eisa Mar 12 09, 17:36

Oh this is great John - what a vivid picture!

Personally I'd have written

falls as pink snow on the grass

but that's just me

Snow

The tree's plum blossom
falls as pink snow to the grass
delicate carpet.

Posted by: Arnfinn Mar 13 09, 04:04

G'day Snow,

Well, no business like snow business.

May change (on)

Seeya,

John

Posted by: ohsteve Mar 13 09, 13:11

John, when the 'snow' business wanes in the summer, go plough through some pubs...lol. Nice picture here.
Steve

Posted by: Arnfinn Mar 15 09, 20:54

A great idea.

Regards,

John